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T(a)3M1N

Nov 07, 2011 15:31

Title: T(a)3M1N
Pairing: Jongtae
Warnings: None
Genre: AU, Sci-Fi, horror?
Rating: T
Summary: Jonghyun thinks that its a bit creepy when his creation begins flirting with him.

( It was a mistake, creatingTaemin. )

sci-fi, horror, one-shot, marredmemories, shinee

Comments 4

ubomb November 8 2011, 01:59:25 UTC

i loved it. everything was very very nice! ♥

marredmemories November 8 2011, 02:03:34 UTC

Thank you ^^

linnhe March 15 2012, 23:23:17 UTC

He leaned down and sniffed the cup, all around the ceramic edges before sniffing the inside and reeling back.

He sniffed the food once, touched the plate and the food twice before trying to slurp the eggs (with little success).

Taemin is absolutely adorable in this, him sniffing the milk and trying to slurp the eggs, how cute! While I enjoyed the way the plot developed, the ending felt a little rushed, lessening its impact. But it was a lovely story <3

marredmemories March 16 2012, 01:41:33 UTC

Thank you for commenting!

To be honest, I did have a totally different ending for this planned, but I was afraid that if I waited too long I would lose interest and it lost a lot of scenes that would have led to and past the ending.

I've beaten myself up over this everytime I read it - but its too late to change it now. -^-'

Thanks for reading, once again.