Wow, for 1 and a half hours you did great... I'd never be able to write like that, let me tell you this. Really, it was enjoyable. ^^ It doesn't have to be a perfect love, because if that love were perfect in your eyes...
ah, cliche remarks from stupid writer Windy. We liked it!
Nicely written first-person view. Probably won't notice unless you noted, it does sound sort of rambled. But it was a good read, especially in just 90 minutes x3
That's the perfect Akabane, you've made me love him even more just for being what he is. I like your Akabane because that's my Akabane you're describing, the one that likes pain but can be oddly sweet, but is in no way fluffy.
I love the mix of fear and passion you've got going here, though some parts are repeated a little too much.
This basically summarized the entire story of A/G i've been working on. Dammit. Now I have to be *original*.
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ah, cliche remarks from stupid writer Windy. We liked it!
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Please! Continue with your remark! I would lvoe to hear what you had to say before you so cruelly trailed off
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*clap clap*
That's the perfect Akabane, you've made me love him even more just for being what he is. I like your Akabane because that's my Akabane you're describing, the one that likes pain but can be oddly sweet, but is in no way fluffy.
I love the mix of fear and passion you've got going here, though some parts are repeated a little too much.
This basically summarized the entire story of A/G i've been working on. Dammit. Now I have to be *original*.
You've made my day ^_^
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I would love to read your fic if it's posted!!!
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