OMG, this must be the longest review I've ever gotten :D *squishes you* Thank you for taking the time to give me this very detail and in-depth review. I'll love you forever for this :)
I understand what you mean about the Morgana part, in fact, I've been trying to write around it, taking the whole thing apart and rewriting it and yet I'm still not satisfied with it. There was just something I can't quite put my finger on why it doesn't feel quite right. And I think you have a point there.
And again, you're right. Who would Arthur be without his arrogance? That was a part of him as much as his name, and yet, I wouldn't have him any other way ;)
Does it show that I love love writing about Gwen? She is so interesting as a character because she's soft and yet she has this hard core within her. She's sensible and earthbound but sometimes she's more flaily than a fangirl :D
Again, thank you for the review hon! You've made my day sparklier than a confetti-coated rainbow hee
Don't you hate struggling like that? It's a pain when you have such a good piece but you're stuck going circles around something you want to include but can't quite manage to convey properly. I hate that. *snugs you*
You're welcome for the review :) I was happy to read and really enjoyed it. Gwen IS a great character and you're absolutely right about her character. I love that about her - her will of iron, gentle and sweet nature and her strong principles.
I haven't dared consider writing for Marlin, but I will happily read the things you write :P Who knows, I may yet be converted...though that's probably a bad idea ;)
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OMG, this must be the longest review I've ever gotten :D *squishes you* Thank you for taking the time to give me this very detail and in-depth review. I'll love you forever for this :)
I understand what you mean about the Morgana part, in fact, I've been trying to write around it, taking the whole thing apart and rewriting it and yet I'm still not satisfied with it. There was just something I can't quite put my finger on why it doesn't feel quite right. And I think you have a point there.
And again, you're right. Who would Arthur be without his arrogance? That was a part of him as much as his name, and yet, I wouldn't have him any other way ;)
Does it show that I love love writing about Gwen? She is so interesting as a character because she's soft and yet she has this hard core within her. She's sensible and earthbound but sometimes she's more flaily than a fangirl :D
Again, thank you for the review hon! You've made my day sparklier than a confetti-coated rainbow hee
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You're welcome for the review :) I was happy to read and really enjoyed it. Gwen IS a great character and you're absolutely right about her character. I love that about her - her will of iron, gentle and sweet nature and her strong principles.
I haven't dared consider writing for Marlin, but I will happily read the things you write :P Who knows, I may yet be converted...though that's probably a bad idea ;)
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Awesome job, sweetie!
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I do love writing her, she's such an interesting character to work with. Again, thanks for the review sweetie! *hugs*
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I love your writing Sue! Keep it up!
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Gwen did kick Arthur's ass huh? I'm really glad you like it, because I did have a mini breakdown about the OOCness of a tomboy Gwen.
Again, thanks for the review!
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