ooc; CONTACT//CONCRIT
Constructive criticism is appreciated. If you have an issue with the way I'm playing Naoto, please contact me through here. (If I've done this right, then all comments are screened.)
In the previous HMD thread, it was brought to my attention that Naoto's relationship with Zell was a rushed one and her reactions to him seemed OOC. After scanning through some posts, I realised there was truth in that--but Naoto is growing, and of course a stance in the City makes her open to changes. Whereas her relationship to Zell was caused mostly by curses and a chains of fortunate--or unfortunate--events, this doesn't mean she will be a big ball of fluff around him. I've therefore corrected--I hope--some of her behaviour around Zell.
At the moment, Naoto honestly cares for one person, and that is Nill. This is the absolute truth--knowing that she cares for Nill is something certain. In regards to Zell, she's not as sure. There is still, and there will always be, the business left unsolved back home, and her desire to get the hell out of the City and get things done (even if she doesn't know if she'll live to tell the tale afterwards); but there are moments of weakness in which she considers she'd like to stay a little bit longer in this place, and Zell is usually the cause. They don't happen often, but they're there. We're all human, we all have some weakness, and Naoto is not exempt of it. I'm trying not to make her be the ever-loving, super adorable girlfriend, because that role simply doesn't fit her.
So, to sum up: I know I started off on the wrong foot. I'm trying to correct that. (Under no circumstances do I want to reset her, though. She's grown here, even without Zell's influence; I'd like to keep that growth going.) I hope I'm doing a good job with it.
Any other input, I guarantee I listen, judge respectively, and do my best.
Concrit=♥
Flames=/=♥ (let's be civilized, or I'm not listening)
Contact the mun:
anonymousdeathgod@gmail.com (always checked)
In the previous HMD thread, it was brought to my attention that Naoto's relationship with Zell was a rushed one and her reactions to him seemed OOC. After scanning through some posts, I realised there was truth in that--but Naoto is growing, and of course a stance in the City makes her open to changes. Whereas her relationship to Zell was caused mostly by curses and a chains of fortunate--or unfortunate--events, this doesn't mean she will be a big ball of fluff around him. I've therefore corrected--I hope--some of her behaviour around Zell.
At the moment, Naoto honestly cares for one person, and that is Nill. This is the absolute truth--knowing that she cares for Nill is something certain. In regards to Zell, she's not as sure. There is still, and there will always be, the business left unsolved back home, and her desire to get the hell out of the City and get things done (even if she doesn't know if she'll live to tell the tale afterwards); but there are moments of weakness in which she considers she'd like to stay a little bit longer in this place, and Zell is usually the cause. They don't happen often, but they're there. We're all human, we all have some weakness, and Naoto is not exempt of it. I'm trying not to make her be the ever-loving, super adorable girlfriend, because that role simply doesn't fit her.
So, to sum up: I know I started off on the wrong foot. I'm trying to correct that. (Under no circumstances do I want to reset her, though. She's grown here, even without Zell's influence; I'd like to keep that growth going.) I hope I'm doing a good job with it.
Any other input, I guarantee I listen, judge respectively, and do my best.
Concrit=♥
Flames=/=♥ (let's be civilized, or I'm not listening)
Contact the mun:
anonymousdeathgod@gmail.com (always checked)