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bamfsherlock June 17 2011, 01:08:13 UTC
*grinding teeth in anxiety*
I can't even give a coherent comment, I swear my face is going to temporarily contorted in frustration for the rest of the night.

thanks for the chapter! :D *awwwH man! :/ so sad...

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leladancer18 June 17 2011, 07:49:34 UTC
Em, I'm keeping my word to continue this fic and I don't regret it for one second, but I'm also sort of um, crying and it was painful reading certain parts, like I want to fix things so bad for everyone. It's a testament to how outstanding your writing is that I'm all out of sorts and over-emotional about the whole thing. You kill me, but in the absolute best way, I assure you. With lines like this: “Please,” he whispers, to whichever almighty power happens to be listening to him in that moment. “Please. Let him be okay. Please let him be okay. I need him. Please. I can’t…I just…I need him. Please.” how can I possibly not adore this and by extension you?

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ext_452113 June 19 2011, 14:24:22 UTC
This is beautiful. Wardo's breakdown was overdue and he's so brave. Nothing like Mark but a different kind of brave. And I love that he doesn't take everything from Mark but says what he thinks. I think that helps Mark, too.
I can't wait for more of this! And I hope so very much that's he is going to be okay.

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leopardchic79 June 25 2011, 04:25:42 UTC
*whimpers* Oh this hurts so much. It's just...brilliant though. Really hope he'll be okay!

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kellyoooh August 8 2011, 17:19:12 UTC
this is just so undeniably beautiful and wonderful and angsty and i do not do angst but i just can not stop reading this beautiful piece of art

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