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marjee_mae

Getting On With It

Mar 20, 2009 01:26

Author: marjee_mae
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Including, unfortunately, Ray Barnett. *Sigh*
Word Count: 1, 576 (The longest one to date!)
Pairing: Ray/Neela (Of course)
Spoilers: Episode 15.20 - Shifting Equilibrium
Summary:For those of you who wanted more. What I think happened between Neela and Ray. Look inside for major fluff!

( You could kiss me, you know. I wouldn't mind. )

fanfiction

Comments 13

ulysses1 March 20 2009, 11:54:52 UTC

Great take! I really was wanting more and I love your spin on it. Too bad we could not see it on the show. I love that Ray was ta taking charge and didn't want to wait to "have" his woman after all his waiting.

Jean

marjee_mae March 20 2009, 14:01:36 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it; I wrote Ray that way because I've always thought that a lot of their heartache could have been avoided if he wasn't being so patient with her. :)

sarahol1 March 20 2009, 13:41:40 UTC

This is how I am going to imagine that scene ended, because while I was totally psyched about their together-ness, it just wasn't ENOUGH! :) Great take on this little scenario. The one thing that was nice about having it end so open (but positive) was that it seemed like a thousand fanfics could start there!

marjee_mae March 20 2009, 14:03:04 UTC

That's exactly what I thought! So, I figured I would just get everybody started. lol Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it!

pearly_eyes March 20 2009, 14:05:54 UTC

lovely extension to that last scene. thanks for sharing that with us.

marjee_mae March 20 2009, 14:09:14 UTC

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! :)

mollywobbles31 March 20 2009, 14:34:19 UTC

Great story! What a great way for me to start my morning off. I was so hyped after watching that episode last night that I literally searched the internet for any clip, peice of information, or story based on it. Thanks for helping make my day a little better. Now I hope that we'll get to see a little of this on tv.

marjee_mae March 21 2009, 01:17:53 UTC

Glad I could help you out! :)

apircot March 22 2009, 05:38:37 UTC

This was absolutely wonderful. I like the chemistry, the raw emotion, the edgyness that you wrote into the story. I could almost feel the heat waves steaming of the screen.

I am kind of jealous. You must have some amazing experiences to write such chemistry, such longing...

If only everyone else was as lucky- we would have brillant ff's like yours.

Good Job!

marjee_mae March 23 2009, 01:44:39 UTC

Wow, thank you! :)