This is a revised version of Fractal Nature based on feedback from my instructor. The particular exercise for this poem was repetition. Her thought was to reduce the word repetition and focus on the image repetition and see what happens. I definitely like this version better. Also the feeling was that the two column structure was confusing so I've gone to a single column.
As always I welcome feedback from any of my readers but I'm particularly interested in what people think about the original Fractal Nature versus the revised version.
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As always I welcome feedback from any of my readers but I'm particularly interested in what people think about the original Fractal Nature versus the revised version.
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