Chocolate Snow

Mar 09, 2012 15:42


Language English

Fandom Football

Characters Cristiano Ronalde & Ricardo Kaká

Rating PG-13

Words 1,383

Summary A cold late December night in Madrid

Rating PG-13

Beta'ed Yes

Disclaimer This is all in my head and in no way meant to be real.

Chocolate Snow )

football, one-shot, ricardo kaká, fiction, cristiano ronaldo

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Comments 11

sparksfly7 March 9 2012, 21:28:09 UTC
I CAN'T TELL YOU HOW HAPPY I AM TO SEE THIS SINCE IT'S BEEN 5 BILLION YEARS SINCE SOMEONE WROTE CRISKA.

aww this is so sweet and cute ♥ I've always had a soft spot for post-retirement fics. I can totally see Cris being a coach and Ricky opening a bookshop.

The whole thing about Caroline dying and Cris helping Ricky heal... :')

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maritsel_chan March 9 2012, 21:33:37 UTC
Her dying is the only way I can see Ricky with someone else. He wouldn't divorce her and I can't see him cheating in a million years.

Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad you like it. (Honestly, you are one of my favourite writers so getting a comment from you is just.. wauw)

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sparksfly7 March 9 2012, 21:42:12 UTC
you're totally right about that. he and Caroline are so in love and such a perfect couple. I'm really happy Kaka has someone like her, because he deserves the best things in life but my CrisKa heart wants him to be with Cris

aww really? that's so sweet of you ♥ thank you. I feel so flattered :D

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narusaku4vr March 12 2012, 02:43:42 UTC
This was so sweet. I've missed reading CrisKa fics and this is warming my heart. They're so in love!

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maritsel_chan March 21 2012, 16:37:11 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! I do sort of miss the CrisKa fics and this one was laying around, so I thought that I would post it.

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lady_chocolata March 12 2012, 16:12:09 UTC
Oh it´s perfect! They´re one my favourite couples and the whole scene is so adorable and beautiful and heartbreaking... Thank you for this:)

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maritsel_chan March 21 2012, 16:38:21 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! It did turn out a bid sad but still happy.

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hawk_sama March 14 2012, 01:26:51 UTC
This was all kinds of fluffy and perfectly Criká. Loved it <333

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maritsel_chan March 21 2012, 16:38:53 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! It got a lot fluffier than I originally planned to be honest.

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coldryuuza March 14 2012, 04:46:56 UTC
OMG, I LOVE LOVE LOVE sappy, domestic lovey-dovey love, espcially the Crika kind :DDDD and thank you for writing a post-retirement fic! there's not many. actually now that I think about it, I don't think I've never read one O.o

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maritsel_chan March 21 2012, 16:39:51 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! There aren't a lot of post-retirement fics? Strange.. I thought that I read a few ages ago. I'm glad you liked it.

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