Comments | marinz: Walking in the Rain on Brooklyn Bridge

marinz

Walking in the Rain on Brooklyn Bridge

May 13, 2005 17:15

The wind was blowing in my face ( Read more... )

poetry

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trivking_64 May 13 2005, 16:17:32 UTC

That was absolutely beautiful --- I felt as if I was actually there

marinz May 13 2005, 19:45:48 UTC

thank you sweety ;)
You always know how to make me smile ♥

elrienne May 13 2005, 17:50:11 UTC

Oooooo! Did you see the university I attended? Unfortunately, since it is located in the middle of the city, there isn't really a campus. But it is in a very convenient location! Where else did you go?

marinz May 13 2005, 19:47:36 UTC

We only passed beside the NYU once, that's it. I dunno if that's the university you went to...?

We went to Chinatown and Little Italy, we spent a lot of time in Time Square, we visited Mme Tussaud's wax museum!!
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It was lots of fun! hehe ;)

word_lover May 14 2005, 18:10:42 UTC

This definitely does a good job of setting a scene. I've never been anywhere near the Brooklyn Bridge but I could feel it.

I love the second line - "And the gentle rain took me in a cold embrace." That's lovely. =)

marinz May 14 2005, 18:32:23 UTC

Thank you ;) It's always good to hear that the reader could picture or feel what was described in the poem *grins*

If you ever get the chance to visit New York, you should most definitely walk on Brooklyn Bridge ;)

word_lover May 14 2005, 19:47:32 UTC

I'll have to keep that in mind if I ever get there. =)