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Forbidden Love - The Unforgivable Couple - Android Dating Sim game Part 2

May 12, 2013 00:57

I need to split this post into a few parts since LJ deemed my post too long and refused my update -.-". Gosh, the typo and grammatical errors this game has made me either cringe or burst laughing. Seriously dude? Can't pay one proofreader for your script? >_>;

Earlier chapters (1st story 1-15)

( Without further ado, here is the next chapters )

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Comments 40

next chapter anonymous May 16 2013, 08:02:26 UTC

hey marine.. can you upload next chapter 24 till 27..

This is a good story and I really wanna know how it ends..

Re: next chapter marine_maiden May 17 2013, 14:24:32 UTC

Honestly I don't think the story is that good but since I've been doing this halfway, I just want to finish uploading it till the end. I'm getting both ends so sit tight. I should be able to upload them tomorrow.

Re: next chapter anonymous May 20 2013, 02:25:47 UTC

Woww.. thank you Marine... XOXO

I Just wanna know how it ends.. :D

But im appreciate your fast response.. ^^,

Re: next chapter marine_maiden May 20 2013, 12:28:21 UTC

You're welcome~

Please anonymous May 19 2013, 02:00:37 UTC

Hi Marine,

Could you please re-organise the slides for mike's end and make them into an album? I really cant read. Thanks ^^

Anonymous XD

Re: Please marine_maiden May 19 2013, 03:22:19 UTC

LOL The only reason I haven't posted the link here is because I have yet sorted them. Now I had sorted them, you should be able to read just fine :)

Re: Please anonymous May 20 2013, 06:05:16 UTC

Hy. Marine..

That Mike's Ending is really cant be read..

it just appear as error page...

Can you fix it for us..? I'll be very happy if you can.. ^^,

Thanks before

Re: Please marine_maiden May 20 2013, 12:29:12 UTC

I sincerely apologize, it was a wrong name folder... I fixed it now. You should be able to see it.

anonymous May 19 2013, 04:43:13 UTC

I am not able to read both endings from my iphone. Something wrong?0.0

marine_maiden May 20 2013, 12:29:45 UTC

No no, it's my fault. It was a wrong folder name... I fixed it now. You should be able to see it.

can't see anonymous May 20 2013, 00:10:20 UTC

Hi marine, i slso can't see both the happy end and anither end. I'll appreciate uf you would help to fix it. Thanks ;)

Re: can't see marine_maiden May 20 2013, 12:30:27 UTC

Sorry, I fixed it. You should be able to see now.

Thanks anonymous May 20 2013, 15:14:30 UTC

Thanks for uploading all the chapters and giving fast replies all the time! I really appreciated it: )

Re: Thanks marine_maiden May 21 2013, 10:47:44 UTC

Np! Glad you actually find the upload useful :)