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iamstealthyone December 20 2006, 06:17:36 UTC
I know I said it before, but poor Olivia! And I felt bad for Sam, too, because he wants so badly to help, but he just can’t. Not yet, at least.

Favorite lines:

Sam nearly bolted right out of the circle when Dean went down. Only the knowledge that he couldn't help his brother if he, too, was unconscious on the floor kept his feet on the right side of the salt line.

Poor, conflicted Sam.

"No kidding it's weird. First you're getting freaky-ass visions, then you're moving furniture with your mind, now you're leaving your body to go talk to strange women in imaginary houses. Pick a power and stick with it, dude."

LOL!

Then Dean bit his lip and transferred his glare to the board, looking as if he would've liked to set it on fire.

I love this, how Dean hates on the Ouija board. *g*

Olivia nodded shakily and pulled back from him. She struggled to stand, but she was obviously weak and hurting. It took her several tries while Sam watched, his hands twitching toward her with an impotent impulse to help.I love the detail about his hands ( ... )

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luxorien December 20 2006, 21:31:50 UTC
"No shit, Sherlock."

Woot! I just know if it weren't for the censors, Dean would say that all the time.

Finally! A fic where Dean doesn't refuse to go to the hospital even when his arm is falling off! Dean's tough, but he's not stupid. If he needs medical attention, he'll seek it.

Liking the action and the mystery.

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iamthedirtgirl January 1 2007, 23:41:17 UTC
Better and better. Great tension and the mystery just keeps getting more tangled and interesting. I am so digging this story.

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