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ilerre February 4 2011, 16:03:55 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwww ♥♥♥

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marie72 February 4 2011, 16:25:35 UTC
Tony needed a little love...

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marie72 February 4 2011, 17:02:34 UTC
I promised no heartache from Tony's dad in this one...I don't think he would survive it! He needs some love form his father to start healing his deep seated wounds...and then he can work on forgiving poor Gibbs...thanks for reviewing!

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finlaure February 4 2011, 17:30:53 UTC
sniffle,,, sob,,, I don't see anything OOC, just someone healing from some very deep seated fears and wounds. There is nothing ooc about crying and getting better. I am glad Tony has enough inner strength to cry and heal. I will never forget the broken look on his face at the end of the episode when Paula died. Now that is the look and much more that I picture him having in this. I also like the in character Gibbs that calls every chance he gets. This is a great story and I really look forward to much much more!!

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marie72 February 4 2011, 20:00:36 UTC
I think in order to move on in his life, Tony needed to begin with Senior. he is the reason for many of his insecurities and fears...he can now I think move on and build the life he deserves...thanks for your review!

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aunt_magick February 4 2011, 17:41:36 UTC
Ok, this chapter brought tears to my eyes. I love the way that you have written Senior and that he is really trying to make amends with Tony. But Tony's heartbreak and despair are so hard to read and this is a testament to how well you have written this. Great work!

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marie72 February 4 2011, 20:01:18 UTC
**tissues** I am happy you feel the emotion behind all this...I appreciate your feedback and taking time to review...

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sexycazzy February 4 2011, 19:22:51 UTC
Aww that was great! Liked the conversation between Tony and senior - nice! :)

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marie72 February 4 2011, 20:01:38 UTC
Thanks for your feedback! :-)

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