What's This?

May 08, 2011 17:21

Title: What's This?
Pairing: Martin Kelly/Martin Skrtel, Daniel Agger (mentions of Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres)
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: This is not true, I made it all up.
Author's Notes: AU. A companion piece to Who has to know? (Agger/Torres), and you will already have met the Martins in part 3. Maybe you should just read that part, so you know a ( Read more... )

player: martin skrtel, player: daniel agger, pairing: kelly/skrtel, fandom: football, fic, player: martin kelly

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marie16fh May 9 2011, 16:26:28 UTC
I had such dirty pictures in my mind when I wrote this, I think I'm going to hell for it. But... how can I not? I mean, Kelly with a dildo ;-)
These two. Oh, these two.
I agree so hard. There's just something about them!

It seems like more people are agreeing with you, so maybe there'll be more? The ending is very open, yeah, I think I'm unable to close off anything properly... It's okay to be greedy like that ;D

Very glad it came out good! I'm always nervous about writing sex-scenes, always feel a bit nervous whether it turns out alright :D

Thank you for all your awesome feedback ♥♥♥

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tetila May 8 2011, 17:33:31 UTC
He's so mad at me now," Dan frowned, looking unhappier by the second, "I don't know what to do, I think he's been getting feelings for me, like... like he wants us to be together or something."

Aww Dan you know you want Nando to be your boyfriend too :D

haha sorry, but Dan as Martin's friend was really cute here.

I'm not a fan of the Martin/Martin but everything was really nicely written.

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marie16fh May 9 2011, 16:14:37 UTC
If he just takes some time to think about it, he'll come to that conclusion ;-)

You still read and commented, I appreciate that so much ♥ Thank you :D

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vicky86x May 8 2011, 18:00:58 UTC
Woooaahhh girl, this is sooo awesome :) I’m so glad you really decided to write this :) and I love that all your stories seem to turn into something epic ;)

Your characterizations are great. Poor Kelly bb, he makes me want to hug him, non-stop, he really seems to have a difficult teenage time. But as Martin points out he is so endearing at the same time :)

And I always had to chuckle when Martin thinks about Dan being straight as an arrow ^^

And the sex? o__O too good and hot to ruin it with words ;)

But wait, is this a one-shot? Please say no, you have to write more of them :) your M&M is aaaaweesome ;)

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marie16fh May 9 2011, 16:13:27 UTC
Well, thank you! *blushes* You flatter me, seriously. I'm glad it wrote it too, finally wrote a Martin/Martin! :D

Yeah, he doesn't have it so easy! But now he has Martin, so I think times will look up for him!

Poor Martin, left out of Dan's big gay secret! *lol*

This was intended a one-shot, but maybe I'll write more, who knows? ;-) Thank you ♥♥

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marie16fh May 9 2011, 16:08:08 UTC
Glad to hear that! :-)

I friended you, so now you can read the other if you still feel like it :-) Thank you ♥

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poynterjoness May 8 2011, 18:40:51 UTC
YEEEEEEEEEEEEY.

needs to finish reading it? or maybe you sent me everything, hoho

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poynterjoness May 8 2011, 18:41:10 UTC
and when did you get home?
no text answered...

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poynterjoness May 8 2011, 18:43:58 UTC
yeah, you only sent me half the sex scene..
okay, gonna read.

sowy.

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poynterjoness May 8 2011, 20:49:10 UTC
MOOOOOAR :D

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