Who has to know? (part one)

[marie16fh]

Title: Who has to know? (part one)
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: This is not true, I made it all up.
Author's Notes: Another teenage!AU... OH MY GOD, WHAT A WIN TODAY. WHAT A WIN. So proud of everyone, they all did a wonderful job! :D Especially our bbs, they were working it!
Wordcount: 3,532
Summary: Dan doesn't

Comments

[narya86]

OH MY GOD! You have no idea how happy you just made me. :D Wow, this really amused me in parts somehow because you somehow manage to really make them talk like real teenagers (which I'm a bit envious of ^^), and other parts just really turned me on. *lol*

Buuut there will be more parts. Right? Right?

(Btw, made me think of your coward fic... I've written parts of the follow-up I wanted to do, but the alphabet challenge came in and distracted me, but as soon as that one's done I'll continue.) :)

[marie16fh]

Yay! :D Maybe I got the talking down because I'm that age myself? Glad it seemed realistic! Good, that was what I was aiming for :D

I hadn't planned on it, but now I see how all of you want it, and I kinda liked the characters in this, so maybe there will be a sequel?

Oh, cool! Still very much looking forward to that!! :D

Thank you! ♥

[narya86]

I really am insanely happy to hear that you've already started writing the sequel. :D *hopes for some hot sex*

And yes, I guess that makes a lot of sense. Thehe. It's never easier than at the same age to observe how teenage boys act and talk after all. ;)

[marie16fh]

I'm just thinking that; either it will turn out good, or I'll just ruin the whole thing :') Hopefully it'll turn out alright!

Yep ;-)

[tetila]

dfaghdjkdlbgölkm! You end it here with my boys being all confused and slightly hurt? NOOOOO!

Needless to say I absolutely loved it. The whole setting and the idea is great.I missed your stories, and my otp, so thank you very much for that precious pearl ♥

[marie16fh]

Yep. I did. Yeeeessssss!

Awh, so glad you did! Thank you so much for reading ♥ Wouldn't be the same amount of fun without you guys dropping all the nice comments!

[vicky86x]

o__O wait is this supposed to be a one-shot? you can't just end it there? Dan is confused and Fernando seems hurt, and... and... o__O

anyway, though I don't want it to end here, I really, really like this. You know how much I like your teenage Dan and Fernando and you always manage to write them so well, they are different every time, but they always seem authentic.

And it might be another teenage-fic, but you always manage to use another set up, so I never think "hmmm okay another teenage-story" which is awesome!

This made my huge grin - after that aaaaaawesome game - even bigger, thanks for that :)

[marie16fh]

This was supposed to be a one-shot, but now that I've read some of the comments you guys have left it seems like many of you want a sequel... So there just might be one ;-) Yeah, it ended on not such a happy note, and Fernando has been thinking about Dan for quite a while, not just recently!

Haha, I like to write teenage!boys too, it's very fun :D Maybe because I'm that age myself, so it's easier than pretending I know much details about worklife and being a grown up *lol*

Awh, now I'm grinning like an idiot, too. Thank you for awesome comment ♥

[marie16fh]

Seems like most of you guys think it would be approprite with a sequel... And now I'm kinda getting excited about the idea. Maybe there will be one!

Probably because I'm that age myself? No, idk, but it's easier for me to write them as teenagers than actual grown-ups, because I don't know squat about that! *lol*

Thank you so much ♥

[katiebooth1983]

Theres going to be more of this right?!?! It's good, really, really good.

Looks like i've got a whole lot more time than i wanted so feel free to continue, if only to cheer me up. I'm one sad puppy at the moment :(

[marie16fh]

I wasn't planning on writing more of this, but now that everyone is asking for it I'm kinda getting excited about it, too... ;-) Maybe there will be a sequel.

Awwh, noes :-(( I don't like the sound of that! *hugs* But seriously, I do think I will write more of this! Hope things will work out!!

Thank you ♥

[katiebooth1983]

sequals are good too. I think it would work well, so many possibilities and avenues to take it.

I'm not sure how things can work out for me at the moment. My only saving grace at the moment is that surely it cant get any worse.

[marie16fh]

Doesn't sound any good at all. How are your prospects? What's happening? :-(