feeling poetic

[marialayne]

I was dead tired but needed to be creative, so worked on and off on this (very) short piece of poetry.

I don't know if it will be appreciated on the lists, but it is here, anyway.

(someone/ OB)

Comments

[bluespirit_star]

That's beautiful - so wistful but hopeful too, I think.

You're so talented & so generous to share this. Thank you.

Love you!
*hugs*

[marialayne]

Thank you! I really appreciate your opinion. Did it format correctly into poetry lines? I always worry. And do you think anyone would read it if I posted it somewhere else?

[bluespirit_star]

Well, I don't really know much about poetry - beyond what I enjoy reading (g) - but it certainly scanned okay to me. :-)
I'm sure other people would love to read it.

*hugs*