Comments | mariagoner: Naruto Fic: Kaleidoscopes (Neji/Hinata, Hyuuga Family)

mariagoner

Naruto Fic: Kaleidoscopes (Neji/Hinata, Hyuuga Family)

Apr 30, 2007 05:24

This is a series of Hinata- and Hyuuga-centered drabbles that were originally written for the amazing runespoor7. Any and all traces of Hyuugacest come from her, I swear. ;) And comments, corrections and criticism are, as always, completely welcome and loved! After all, a little encouragement never fails to add a bit of inspiration...

Title: Kaleidoscopes ( Read more... )

fic, naruto

Comments 12

individual April 30 2007, 12:56:31 UTC

Ah, I love these. All of them. I don't know if I could specify my favorite but.... hm. -goes and scans them quickly- 1, 2, 3, 6, and 7 I liked the most. And yes, I know that's half of them. -bricked- One and two are really sad, I csn't really say why I love three so much, but I do, and six and seven are just hillarious. XD The picture of Hanabi with a crush just makes me laugh. ♥;;

Anyway, great job. Added this to my memories. ♥

mariagoner April 30 2007, 23:11:59 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed this series of drabbles! And I confess, #6 is totally my favorite as well. Ah Hanabi... I love how much potential her character has-- and warping it to my own views of her. That's always fun, seriously. XD

Adoring this hello_scorpling April 30 2007, 21:11:19 UTC

These were so, so good. You write neji and Hinata so well, both together and by themselves. Much love. ♥

Re: Adoring this mariagoner April 30 2007, 23:10:37 UTC

Thank you for the love! My heart always appreciates it. ;)

kamecchi April 30 2007, 23:58:11 UTC

I liked scenario nine the best! Hahahahaha, silly Naruto! XD

mariagoner May 1 2007, 00:28:58 UTC

Oh Naruto! You'd think that most people would be happy to see so much naked Hyuuga flesh but I guess he just felt like being contrary that day. XD

amaiko May 1 2007, 21:28:01 UTC

Scenario 9: The one where Naruto is tempted to gouge his eyeballs out.

BWAHAHA. Poor Naruto, finding out the hard way that not all of the Hyuuga are pretty. This makes me think of that icon that has a picture of the wrinkled old Hyuuga bastard that wanted Hizashi's death and the caption "Neji in 40 years".

Lovely, wonderful job all around! I just wish they were longer. ;-;

mariagoner May 1 2007, 23:34:44 UTC

Heeeeee! Now I want to go view that caption myself. XD And yeah, from what I can see, the Hyuuga tend to be hot when they're young but, uh... they don't age so well. Hopefully Hinata and Neji will be the exception to that rule. XD

I'm glad you enjoyed! I have to admit, it's been tough to get my Naruto muse to stay with me for long. I keep trying to write Naruto fic and abandoning them mid-way. DX Kishi's been confusing me with the recent Deadly Viper Assasination Squad stuff he's building around God Boy Sasuke and my motivation, it is aflagging. ::sigh::

runespoor7 May 2 2007, 16:35:16 UTC

Heee, you added a line in 5! (it's blatant subtextual NejiHina now, really.)

And I didn't comment on 10 before, but I wanted to tell you that I love what you've done with it, I find the repetition of the structure quite daunting and I love how you've managed to give Hanabi depth even though another character's eyes.

*hugs fic post so so tight*

mariagoner May 2 2007, 21:08:13 UTC

Oh, y'know how I am. I can't help but sneak NejiHina into everything. They were my first OTP, after all! I still harbor so much love for them. ♥

And thanks to your prompts, I think I'm getting a bit of an interest in Hanabi myself. There is just so much you can do with her, based on the little hints we get of her from canon and games and what have you. It's hard not to take her and start running with ideas of how she could be in fic...

I'm glad you enjoyed this post overall! All for you, babe, I swear. ;)