I thought "I'll fix the messed-up parts of that comic and then post it on the internet." Then I had a fit of self-knowledge and realized I was never going to fix the messed-up parts. An' so, I present to you...
Notes: I was switching back and forth between pen and brush while I was doing this (i.e. the first and third pages are pen, the second and fourth are brush). Which do you prefer? I can't make up my mind.