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FIC: Eclipse (Centon; Rated R; 15/15)

Jul 01, 2011 18:37

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Title: Eclipse
Pairing: Centon (main)
Story Rating: R
Chapter Rating: R
Summary: When trust becomes an issue, things can go horribly wrong.
Author's Notes: LKJSDFLKJSDFLKJSDF IT'S OVER. Is it really over? I can't believe it's over. I don't think it's over yet. No, it's over. But but but but. Pfft. Just want to ( Read more... )

r, justin gabriel, john cena, cenabriel, randy orton, fic, centon

Comments 32

glenvorian July 1 2011, 11:49:47 UTC

I'm so freaking SAD that it's finished, you've no idea! T.T

marcianafics July 2 2011, 17:04:56 UTC

:: sigh. :: In my head, it's not finished yet.

glenvorian July 2 2011, 19:50:40 UTC

Why the sigh, doll? xD

realitycheck22 July 1 2011, 11:58:09 UTC

Omfg!!you got me cumming in my effing panties!Those are a throw away, for a great fucking reason. Damn girl !That was blazing. HOT!!
Justin is such a sucker for John! Taking his clothes too? You better believe he's not leaving John alone. On the other hand,Randy is not sitting back and watching Justin take John away.
The icing on the cake, Randy and John are BACK!!
That was an amazingly story.XXDDD.

marcianafics July 2 2011, 17:06:17 UTC

Trollololol! XD Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it all the way! <3

realitycheck22 July 2 2011, 17:21:41 UTC

I did enjoy it, immensely. Besides, it's hard not to when you write the way you do. It's great man. Quick question though, is What Goes Around done? Sorry if it's a stupid question,. Lolz!!

marcianafics July 2 2011, 18:02:28 UTC

No, it's far from done, but because it's set from a year back, I barely know what I'm doing with it anymore. I officially put it on hiatus to work on THIS one, and I would LOVE to get to go back to What Goes Around eventually, because it was getting good, LOL. <3

nlee86 July 1 2011, 12:29:58 UTC

loved it that was H-O-T HOT. that was the sexiest thing I've ever read. the story was great, its sad that its over. it would be awesome to read a sequel but that's up to you, I'm always a loyal reader great job and thank you:)

marcianafics July 2 2011, 17:14:46 UTC

Awww, thank you so much! And like I told my friend, it's not done for me yet! D:

Thank you so much again for sticking for it as long as you did, I'm SO glad you enjoyed it! <3

nic_evan89 July 1 2011, 12:46:59 UTC

omg...omg...
its not enough bb...

omg...possessive!randy is hot..
i love it when they both fighting for john..
they should...
he's adorable,dammit...

any sequel for this bb??

marcianafics July 2 2011, 17:15:34 UTC

I heart possessive!Randy, :: giggle. ::

It really isn't done for me yet, no way! D: T.T

boredomdelux July 1 2011, 13:12:10 UTC

that was just fucking great. and Randy being all intimidating and possessive at the end there just made the whole thing! (I don't care too much for Justin, so I'm just glad Randy "rubbed in his face who John really belongs to" :D). Randy can be scarier than hell if he wants to, and you used it just at the right time. Kudos for ah-ma-zing fucking story alltogether!

marcianafics July 2 2011, 17:39:35 UTC

I didn't want to have shouting, freak-out Randy all up in Justin's face, it didn't feel right for the tone of the chapter, and I didn't want to end it feeling heavy.

Thank you so much for sticking with it all the way to the end! It's still realnot done for me, dammit! XD