FIC: Eclipse (Centon; Rated R; 14b/15)

[marcianafics]

Disclaimer: Usual disclaimers apply.
Title: Eclipse
Pairing: Centon (main)
Story Rating: R
Chapter Rating: R-13
Summary: When trust becomes an issue, things can go horribly wrong.
Author's Notes: Here's 14b, y'all. I wasn't going to write this chapter without writing 14a first, I just loved that part to pieces, and I love how people kind of freaked

Comments

[nlee86]

loved it cant beleive randy is going to watch it. its going to be hot thats for sure cant wait for more a great birthday gift thankyou:)

[marcianafics]

Watch? JUST watch? Really? ;)

[socyd]

I don't know if my ovaries can take the next chapter.

[marcianafics]

I'm not sure mine can either. XD

[burgandybaby]

Woo-hoooooo!!!! This can only get better!! Love it!

[marcianafics]

Heehee! Thanks, I hope the next chapter lives up to expectations!

[messyjessy08]

Oooh....Voyeurism!Randy. how sexy. I gotta say, i totally thought JG was gonna like snap, and pop out a knife on John or something, but im glad all he wants is more sex. That's definitely a condition i back 100%! :P

[marcianafics]

I honestly thought so too, and I think in my first draft, he was in fact going to pull a knife on John or something. I lifted the original scene in the movie I based this off of for this chapter in my original draft, but then I moved the argument and confession in chapter 13 from the streets of Florida to inside Randy's car, and for some reason, Justin changed as well. I don't know, I like THIS Justin better than stalker!Justin but not as much as creeper!house-intruding!bedroom-fapping!Justin.

[glenvorian]

PULLED A KNIFE!?!

Holy Hades. :O

Damn, now I wish I could read the original scenes. xD

[irishsaints]

between what i'm working on, and this- my ovaries are definitely going KAPLOOEY on the next chapter.

i LOVE THIS, so hardcore, you don't even understand. i just....ugh, SO GOOD MARCH. SO GOOD. you WIN.

[marcianafics]

B'awwwwwwww, Nellie bb, ILU. <3