FIC: Eclipse (Centon; Rated R; 6/?)

[marcianafics]

Disclaimer: Usual disclaimers apply.
Title: Eclipse
Pairing: Centon (main)
Story Rating: R
Chapter Rating: PG-13
Summary: When trust becomes an issue, things can go horribly wrong.
Author's Notes: I really love every single one of you. I swear. We're a little less than halfway done, so hang in there. ;)
X-posted to: marcianafics, cenaortonmylove and lady_tavington

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Comments

[nlee86]

loved it. i wonder what is up with john and Alanna? interesting. i still think randy is lying? old friend from Missouri i don't think so Randal. loved it.

[marcianafics]

Thank you so much! I love how very few people are actually siding with Randy, it's AWESOME. I'm trying to make Randy as likable as possible by having him be romantic to John still, but we can't turn a blind eye to what he may or may not be doing.

...

Or can we? ;)

[messyjessy08]

I love how sweet they are together. centon can be so adorable....

[marcianafics]

RIIIIIIIIIGHT?! It's so easy for me to write them this way, but then they really just write it themselves.

[irishsaints]

ahh this made my heart hurt with happy and sad all at once. there was like, this instant, FLEETING INSTANT of normality, of things ALMOST BEING LIKE THEY USED TO BE and Randy was gonna make all the insecurities and unsure-ness go away the way Randy always does, and then. THE FREAKIN PHONE. ALWAYS WITH THE PHONES.

unf, my heart breaks for both of them now because i feel like Randy DOES want this, wants John, SO.BAD. but things AREN'T THE SAME AND WHY CAN'T THEY BE THE SAME?! please tell me this story has a happy ending?! my emotions might not be able to take it otherwise o.O

also, Alanna!love :D always good to have a little bit of adorable Alanna in there :D

[marcianafics]

I KNOW ALL THESE GODDAMN PHONES THEY KEEP CAUSING TROUBLE AND NOW THEY RUINED THE MOMENT AND JUST LKJADFLKJSDF.

Randy definitely loves John very, VERY much, I think it's just that neither of them really know exactly how much.

And YES, I had to throw Alanna into this story. I love the idea of John being a father, but there's still no word on whether he actually IS one already, and he once said he's not sure he'll make a very good father, so it just all kind of fit into this, LOL. I hate to do this to Sam tho, I love Sam. XD

[couchqueen]

loved the update. I loved that we got a little, little snippet on how canon Centon is and can be when everything is right, and how adorable they really are.

Hmm.. poor unsure and insecure John. And what's up with Randy and his "old friend from Missouri". He's lying about something, I think. and aww.. love the Alanna mention.

[marcianafics]

I seriously love all this reaction to Randy. Nobody knows if they wanna be mad at him or not for what he may or may not be doing to John, but then he's so romantic and so sweet to him.

Yeah, I just had to throw Alanna into this one. I've never used her in a fic, and I thought this was the right one to do it in. :D

[unpublicguy]

I don't know what happen to John and Alanna but truthfully I will forgive Randy if he turns out cheating with Cody...or who's the other guy? *shrug*

...Point is, I'll forgive him (and John better forgive him as well)...because of this chapter. Nothing better than to show the sweet side of the Viper. *giggles*...

*wink*

[marcianafics]

Yeah, I think we're all a sucker for Randy's sweet side. I love how nobody really knows if they wanna be mad at Randy. Is he cheating? Is he not? He's so sweet tho. LOL.