[Oneshot] Try A Little Tenderness

[marciafan]

TITLE: Try A Little Tenderness
AUTHOR: marciafan
CHARACTERS: Jenny Shepard, Jethro Gibbs
GENRE: Angst, Romance, AU
RATING: PG
SUMMARY: New installment in the AU Elizabeth series. Jenny has a secret to reveal, and the consequences may be devastating for her and Gibbs.
WORD COUNT: 1,763
PROMPT: Words #12 for Round #10 at madame_director
WARNINGS: Alternate Universe.

Comments

[nicis_anatomy]

First ;)

Oh, what a shocker ;) Okay, I already knew what was going to happen. Sort of ... But it was still a shock to learn that Jethro wasn't there when Jen was pregnant with Liz. I never really thought about it and assumed that this stories are placed so far in the future that she got pregnant after becoming director ... but it makes so much more sense the way you wrote it.

I liked it. I really, really liked it. Loved it. And the cliffhanger is bad ;) Hope you will work on that sequel soon.

Oh, and one tiny thing (if this is allowed): I don't think Jenny was a liaison officer with Mossad. She could've been a liaison agent with NCIS working together with Mossad (like Ziva, only the other way around - and agent instead of officer, because NCIS has agents and Mossad has officers ...) ;)

[blood_red_alibi]

Wow... not what I was expecting. It was lots happier news than I was expecting. I thought she was sick, and she's just expecting a baby. Whew! Great story, and now I'm curious as to what her decision is going to be. Although the ending seemed to be done in true Bellisariso fashion, leaving us hanging to make our own ending.

Well done!

[marciafan]

Aww, I'd never make Jenny sick! Well, I did in one fic...very sad fic that I wrote to try and get out of the denial I was (and still am) living in. But that only made me realize that living in denial is so much better lol!

Thanks for the comment, and I'm glad the cliffhanger got you curious, that means I did it right! A sequel will be coming, hopefully soon!

[blood_red_alibi]

Well, at least here in Denial I seem to have good company. I can't wait for the next part(s?). And may I just say that I adore your banner.

[marciafan]

Hahaha, that was the idea! I will most definitely write a sequel =) But I'm glad you seemed to like the story *grins*

[mandovska]

errr...ok, so I don't know Elizabeth but I know this story is perfect. Marzia, you're one hell of a writer! At this point, I'm even considering reading Trenny just because you're damn good!

x

[marciafan]

Awww, that's one of the best compliments ever made to me! *hugs you tightly* I'm so very glad you enjoyed the story, I sure hope you want to read more of my fics =)

[ainexxxxxx]

You have to write a sequel I might die if you don't

[marciafan]

Don't die LOL! I will write it, don't worry =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!

[cici1018]

This was the best thing to come home to! ♥ I'm glad you finally finished it so I could read the whole thing...not just bits and pieces XD And a sequel? Awesome =]

[marciafan]

Well, you've been a huge help with the bits and pieces! And I'm so so so happy you liked the finished version *hugs you tightly*
Oh and a sequel of course...or you want me to leave you all wondering what Jenny will decide? XD

[cici1018]

Um, sequel, please XD And I was glad to help with the bits and pieces. It had been a while since I helped you with bits and pieces of a fic lol or so it seemed to me XD

[marciafan]

It had been a while since we last talked and since I last wrote a fic, that's it XD

And yeah, sequel is coming hopefully soon ;)