[Oneshot] New Memories Of Paris

Jan 17, 2010 20:27

TITLE: New Memories Of Paris
AUTHOR: marciafan
CHARACTERS: Jenny Shepard, Trent Kort, Jethro Gibbs. Jenny/Kort romance with major hints of Jibbs
GENRE: Angst, Romance, AU
PROMPT: #14 "The fact that you know where to find me on a Sunday morning is a little scary, Gibbs. Please." @ madame_director
RATING: T
WORD COUNT: 3,130
SUMMARY: “Does this count as foreplay now?” She ( Read more... )

public entry, fanfics, madame_director contest, ncis

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nicis_anatomy January 17 2010, 20:01:40 UTC
Oh, that was ... that was ... I'm speechless. I really don't know what to say. Awesome! So in character and anything but AU. With the last part ... it all makes sense and Jenny wasn't lying at all. Cleverly done! I love it. And it has something for everyone: Jibbs and Trenny;)

I think my favorite part (besides the hot scenes in the hotel room) is this one:

He had underestimated Jennifer Shepard, of that much he was sure. The chauvinist, sexist part of him had led him to believe that she was just the ordinary female agent who slept her way to the top and managed to stand there as long as she stood silent and pretty. Only now did he realize she was so much more than that.He is so right! Jenny would be really glad if she would know about this. She really would ( ... )

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marciafan January 17 2010, 20:11:45 UTC
Aww, thank you SO much!! It means the world to me that you actually liked this *pulls you in an Abby-hug*

The ending came to me the other day while I was watching Angel of Death, I had already thought of this fic, so I thought it would work lol. And I just had to add some Jibbs in there, you know me *blushes*

And LOL you should tell Jen that *my* Kort thinks that of her :P

Oh, and I didn't know that about the season finale! Thanks, Nici-pedia ♥ but yeah, the prompt wouldn't have worked with a Wednesday or a Tuesday lol. Hope you amazing readers won't mind =)

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nicis_anatomy January 17 2010, 20:55:29 UTC
I never doubted for a second that I won't like it! I think I told you before that I love everything you write ;)

It was a perfect ending. Really. I would have never thought of this but it makes perfect sense. Thumbs up!

Actually, this theme was part of many diary entries in my NaNo story (Jenny was very insecure because of that at often annoyed that people thought that way), and it made me smile to read that someone really starts to see her different. Jenny would really have liked that.

As I said: It makes no difference. Really. I wasn't even sure if I should mention it at all. Because it's nothing ;) *hugs* When will be get the sequel? I mean, the dinner he promised here? *ggg*

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marciafan January 17 2010, 21:00:10 UTC
LOOOL I thought about that for a while, I must admit... The dinner sequel, I mean... who knows, maybe I'll come up with something ;) With maybe some jealous!Jethro in it... males fighting for territory XD

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cici1018 January 17 2010, 20:40:33 UTC
I'm not a big fan of Kort, as you know lol, but you did an awesome job with this =]

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marciafan January 17 2010, 20:57:13 UTC
Lol, I know XD but thank you so much for reading this! I'm happy you liked it anyway *hugs*

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daantjex January 17 2010, 20:58:58 UTC
I love jenny/kort I hope you writhe more stories about them xx

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marciafan January 17 2010, 21:01:50 UTC
Thank you very much!! I hope I'll write more stories about them too =)

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daantjex January 18 2010, 13:53:03 UTC
I hope you place the sequel soon. Do you now when you are coing to place te sequel/ or write the sequel . I can't wait to read it !!! =) xx

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marciafan January 18 2010, 15:11:14 UTC
The sequel will hit your screens possibly sometime this week. It's in the works right now, I hope I can find time to write it at night when I'm back from work =)

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marciafan January 17 2010, 21:21:08 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this and I hope you liked the other fics of mine you read! And as for replies...I feel your pain, I fail at replies too, lol. But as long as you enjoy the stories, it's perfectly fine =)

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marciafan January 18 2010, 15:12:12 UTC
I hope you do post something, I'm always looking forward to new material =)

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marciafan January 17 2010, 21:40:03 UTC
Thank you! I'm so happy to see that more people like this pairing! I am definitely going to write more about them ;) So stay tuned!

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