X-Men: Marked

Aug 04, 2006 12:18

As promised, the longer W/R ficlet. I started this a while ago, then had the brilliant idea of making it a drabble of exactly 500 words. God, that was hell. Never again!

Title: Marked
Paring: Rogue/Wolverine
'Verse: Movieverse
Rating: PG
Theme Set: Beta, #05 - Mirror
Words: 500
Much thanks to sionnain for the beta. Magneto can come back now. :)

Marked )

x-men, drabbles, fanfic

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kathrynthegr8 August 4 2006, 16:46:43 UTC
Beautiful. I loved this.

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marastar August 6 2006, 23:31:18 UTC
Thank you! That makes me very happy.

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luckystar37 August 4 2006, 17:14:41 UTC
Nice... denile and longing. Lovely compliments.

Don't you love challenging yourself? Now I want to try a 500 word dealie... Oh heck, I want to write again.

But in the meantime I'll read :) So thank you for writing... and thanks for writing THIS.

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marastar August 6 2006, 23:32:32 UTC
And thank you for the comment and the compliments! I really appreciate it.

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dutchxfan August 4 2006, 19:39:12 UTC
That was utterly beautiful. Very intense. I love it to pieces. Now I want to hug you for writing such a wonderful fic. *hugs*

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marastar August 6 2006, 23:35:18 UTC
*hugs back*

But I think it's Rogue that really needs a hug. Or a cuddle ... or a really intense kiss from the object of her affection ... ;)

Thank-you so much for your comment!

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edoraslass August 5 2006, 03:34:51 UTC
She wishes sometimes that she could have marked him somehow. He must have so many invisible scars. She'd like one to be hers.

I'm just in love with this sentence. It's a little creepy, but oddly understandable.

Or maybe it's because he's older, and so very beyond her reach. Which, if she's really honest, is likely the most appealing thing of all.
*snerk* I mean, um, NO, I have no idea what she means!

She's not even sure what it will cost her, in the end, to want to put him back together.
Oh dear. I don't envy her that feeling, or that (argueably impossible) task.

Very nice tension and wistfulness. Hmmmm, what about a Logan flip-side view? *chucks bunny and runs*

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marastar August 7 2006, 00:44:46 UTC
*gasp*

And now it's in my head! And it's dark and angsty and AHHHHHHHHHH!!!

You ... you ... bunny-throwing sadist, you! *shakes fist*

Crap. Now I have to try and write that damn thing.

It's a little creepy, but oddly understandable.

Oh yes. Definitely creepy. I don't know why, but when I got into what I imagined was in Rogue's head after X1, it just came out that way. I figure she knows that what she wants is so inappropriate anyway -- at least, by society's norms -- that she tends to focus on things that are more primal and somewhat disturbing.

That was what I was going for, anyway. ;)

Then again, the entire W/R relationship is kinda fucked up. They routinely kill/maim each other and save each other.

God, how I love comic-book characters!

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deep_salt_water August 5 2006, 05:06:51 UTC
Babe, this was AMAZING! So beautifulm and sad and ... ugh.

Speechless.

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marastar August 7 2006, 00:46:11 UTC
*blushes*

What a wonderful thing to say. Thank you!

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