Me too! I'm glad you liked it, I wanted it to be sad, but hopeful and I'm very glad I managed to accomplish that. The last line really brought it home for me.
Thank you! It is a bit gloomy, but as the story progressed I aimed to inject hope. That's what the last line, in my opinion, really manages to capture - that sense of hope for the future, even thought things can never be the way they use to be.
I think that's something she and House have in common in this scenario.
This is very beautiful. I love the mixture of angst and hope in it. You deal with the prompt very nicely. And your writing is great, too. My favorite part is the ending. It's so them. Great work!
This was angsty and hot and so very, very well done. The emotions felt so real and ooooh House/Cam sex! And not just sex, realistic sex! Definitely winner. And THANK YOU for the hope! I
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I think that's something she and House have in common in this scenario.
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My favorite part is the ending. It's so them.
Great work!
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