TWfic: Guilty of Dust and Sin (Jack/Ianto, PG-13ish)

[marag]

TITLE: Guilty of Dust and Sin

Comments

[seimaisin]

Very nice! This fills the emotional gap well - Ianto being haunted and sort of defeated, before Jack gets to him, and Jack being sort of confused and manic. They make sense, and they make sense together. I like it! :D

[marag]

Whew! ::wipes brow:: This was...difficult to write. "Hate Can Pardon" wrote itself, almost literally, but this story fought me every step of the way. And when I was done, I *still* wasn't sure that it worked.

Thank you!

[akire_yta]

oooh, I enjoyed this, esp. the "oh, you want to talk" bit - Ianto would try to figure it out, and Jack would say "oh, can't we just be making with the hawt sex now?"

I really liked this!

[marag]

Thank you! Some of these bits I wasn't even sure why I was writing them, but the characters *insisted*. Like I didn't intend to have Ianto want to talk, but he just sat his butt down and that was it. Hmmph. Pushy characters ;)

[stranj100]

Wonderful as usual. Might I suggest posting at galactic_conman and torchwoodcoffee. Sorry, I never get the formatting right.

[marag]

Thank you and thank you for the suggestion! I've posted at both comms :)

[stranj100]

You're welcome. Anything to wheedle more fics out of you.

[shala]

This . . . filled in a hole I was only peripherally aware existed. And also made me grin like a loon. Ianto and Jack are ridiculously adorable for all their respective angst-filled existences. The descriptions of Nine and Rose are just so spot on.

(And also I got to take a nice break from writing this paper that's due in about twelve hours. \o/)

[marag]

Good luck on the paper! And I'm very glad you enjoyed this fic :) Once again, the characters made me do it.

[marag]

::blush:: Thank you! The disconnect in their relationship nagged at me until I wrote this :)