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The Dream Givers

Jun 22, 2007 11:06

Title: The Dream Givers
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary:Written in response for the SJRS October 2005 challenge. What do Luke and Mara fear the most? Note: I posted this as "Artanis" on the SJRS.

It's an older fic, but I feel the need to post something.

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era:new republic, author:tianaluthien, theme:action, fics

Comments 4

gabri_jade June 23 2007, 05:08:00 UTC

I'm glad you did post! And we'd love to see more older fics posted here; I certainly hadn't seen this story before. :)

the sense of evil grew thicker the deeper they went; like an oily cloud

I love the imagery there. :D

Very interesting scenario with this story, and I think you hit the nail on the head with Luke and Mara's deepest fears. Good job! I hope to see more from you. :)

tianaluthien June 23 2007, 15:18:29 UTC

*blush*

Thank you :) The funny thing about this fic is that those two different scenarios had been in my head for years, but I hadn't been able to think of how to make them work!

deaka June 23 2007, 09:16:17 UTC

Very nice. I liked the way that you have the two scenarios merging together, their deepest fears bleeding into one another. Creepy, but very in-character.

Great work! :D

tianaluthien June 23 2007, 15:19:03 UTC

Thank you :) I'm so glad you liked!