Fic: Veil of Shadows, 10/13, PG-13

[viariskywalker]

Title: Veil of Shadows
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Category: AU, angst, romance
Timeframe: OT; around time of ANH
Summary: A strange tale where the good guys are bad, the Empire has won, and a Sith adept pursues the girl of his nightmares.

Chapter 1     Chapter 6
Chapter 2     Chapter 7
Chapter 3     Chapter 8
Chapter 4     Chapter 9
Chapter 5

Comments

[sandspirit]

A Jedi Knight?! A former one it seems.
I loved your description of Luke drawing on the dark energy. And it's interesting that he realises he can't safely control it.
And I loved the flashback with the bearded man.

[viariskywalker]

Yes, he is indeed a former Jedi Knight. If you ever see a picture of a Tusken Raider Jedi, that's probably him. ;)

I particularly enjoyed writing the part where Luke draws on the dark side, and also the flashback. I just love flashbacks. :D

[emavalexis]

There's such a gorgeously dark progression to this fic. Wonderful introduction of the Jedi into this story.

Great action writing, too; that's one I always struggle with. Yet again, I am raptly awaiting the next chapter!

[viariskywalker]

There's such a gorgeously dark progression to this fic.

That's one of the coolest compliments I've gotten. :D I wanted it to be dark without being unrelentingly, over-the-top dark, so I'm glad whatever I'm doing is working. ;)

Great action writing, too; that's one I always struggle with.

That was seriously the hardest part to write in this whole story. No joke. It was also one of the last scenes I completed. Because action scenes scare me to death. I'm happy this one actualy worked! :)