Title: Veil of Shadows
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Category: AU, angst, romance
Timeframe: OT; around time of ANH
Summary: A strange tale where the good guys are bad, the Empire has won, and a Sith adept pursues the girl of his nightmares.
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I loved your description of Luke drawing on the dark energy. And it's interesting that he realises he can't safely control it.
And I loved the flashback with the bearded man.
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I particularly enjoyed writing the part where Luke draws on the dark side, and also the flashback. I just love flashbacks. :D
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Great action writing, too; that's one I always struggle with. Yet again, I am raptly awaiting the next chapter!
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That's one of the coolest compliments I've gotten. :D I wanted it to be dark without being unrelentingly, over-the-top dark, so I'm glad whatever I'm doing is working. ;)
Great action writing, too; that's one I always struggle with.
That was seriously the hardest part to write in this whole story. No joke. It was also one of the last scenes I completed. Because action scenes scare me to death. I'm happy this one actualy worked! :)
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