Title: Veil of Shadows
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Category: AU, angst, romance
Timeframe: OT; around time of ANH
Summary: A strange tale where the good guys are bad, the Empire has won, and a Sith adept pursues the girl of his nightmares.
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And I loved the breathless moment between him and Mara just before the howl.
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Hehe… that’s actually a good thing and a compliment, though. XD Your style is very effective, and I also love the slowly drawn out attraction that Luke has for Mara. This is potent and full of delicious tension.
Nicely done and, as always, I look forward to the next part.
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I'm happy to hear that the tension between Luke and Mara is clear. I can totally feel it when I'm writing, but I like to know that the reader feels it, too.
By the way, cool icon!
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