Fic: Veil of Shadows, 6/13, PG-13

[viariskywalker]

Title: Veil of Shadows
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Category: AU, angst, romance
Timeframe: OT; around time of ANH
Summary: A strange tale where the good guys are bad, the Empire has won, and a Sith adept pursues the girl of his nightmares.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5

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6. Rescue

Love hadn’t existed for Luke until the day he

Comments

[jadepilot]

That's certainly not the reception Luke thought he'd receive!!!! Looking forward to more soon!

[viariskywalker]

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! :D

[sandspirit]

Shoving her against the wall wasn't a good start surely. :)
And she also remembered him from the first meeting, though perhaps her first impression wasn't quite like his. :)

[viariskywalker]

Mara probably won't look at it as a gesture of love, that's for sure. ;)

She's definitely not on the same page as Luke. Poor guy. Flew half way across the galaxy, and she's not even interested. :P

Thanks for commenting!

[archaeologist_d]

Mara - same sharp tongue. She may not see the desire in his eyes or maybe she did and is using her wit to keep him at bay. At least she knows who he is.

Good job.

[viariskywalker]

Thank you! Mara's shrewd, but she's still young, so it could be either possibility. *keeps readers in suspense* ;)

[emavalexis]

Awwwwwesome. You write the interaction and tension between them so well. Another fantastic update!

[viariskywalker]

Thank you very much! I'm happy to hear you're still enjoying everything! :D