Fic: Veil of Shadows, 4/13, PG-13

[viariskywalker]

Title: Veil of Shadows 
Rating: PG-13 
Warnings: None 
Category: AU, angst, romance 
Timeframe: OT; around time of ANH 
Summary: A strange tale where the good guys are bad, the Empire has won, and a Sith adept pursues the girl of his nightmares.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

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4. Almost Normal

"How we doing, Artoo?”

The droid whistled unhappily that they

Comments

[jadepilot]

wow! I love this AU you've written.

[viariskywalker]

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)

[archaeologist_d]

Very interesting AU there. I liked that Luke was crying but that Vader's advice seemed to help him out.

I don't know how dark Luke could get and still remain Luke but it will be cool to see what you do with him.

[viariskywalker]

It's kind of twisted that Vader can still sometimes give good advice. ;)

I'm really having fun with this dark side Luke. It's interesting to explore how different circumstances and surroundings can change the way a person develops.

[sandspirit]

Ha! Luke's relationship with Artoo didn't change much with him being a Sith adept. I love it. :)
The flashback was fascinating! The other child could be Mara, I think.

[viariskywalker]

That exchange between Artoo and Luke was one of my favorites to write. :)

I love doing flashbacks. But as to who the other child was - my lips are sealed!

[emavalexis]

Oooooh! What a place to leave off -- I'm really curious about what will happen next. :)

This fic is shaping up really well -- great work!

[viariskywalker]

I hope you won't be disappointed! :D

Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

[were_lemur]

*giggles* AU!Artoo. Some things never change.

[viariskywalker]

Artoo is so much fun. I couldn't resist inserting him here. :D