Tony Stark fic: As Dirty As You Like It Rated NC17

[maquisleader]

As Dirty As You Like It

Tony follows Natalie's advice to do whatever he wants with whoever he wants on his last birthday.

Comments

[mashfanficchick]

Jesus Christ! You're going to kill me, woman, I swear! *fans herself, trying to get her thoughts back* I have to be honest, because it's a compliment: I am NOT a fan of reading about women receiving oral sex. I don't know why; I just don't like it. But this...God, I didn't know it could be that hot! Not to mention the rest of it, the parts I figured I'd like, but you still blew me away. And all of that, of course, after the most important thing to me: great characterization, and even better dialogue (and, for that matter, narration: The look announced that he - Tony Stark - existed and your sexuality was irrelevant is not only one of the most amusing lines I've ever read for its truth, it's also one of the truest to the character: Tony would think that, and would revel in it, regardless of his own sexuality).

In conclusion, because I have no idea if anything I wrote made any sense: very hot, very well-written, and I continue to seriously enjoy your fic. Thanks for posting it!

[maquisleader]

Thx for the great feedback! Of course you made sense! I'm of the opinion that women have too much playgound equipment and it's not pretty -- but men seem to like it. So I figured Tony would and went from there.

I think Tony is interested in giving and receiving pleasure and I think he's probably tried some things with men on occasion. Why not? If it feels good, do it. ;)

I added the picture that inspired that particular paragraph about Tony's pose to the bottom of the fic. To me, it sorta says it all.

[dracutgrl]

As you know, I'm T/P all the way - but this was hella hot. Thank goodness I read it BEFORE my morning shower!

And loved, loved, LOVED the reference to the "trendy Afghanistan training program." So very, very Tony.

[maquisleader]

Thank you! I had fun writing it, he's very honest about who he is and what he wants. I'm not a big Natalie fan at all, but I thought there just had to be more here than we saw.

I'm glad you liked it!

[stephiel]

*swoon....*

On. man. This is some of the most scorching hot fic I've read in a good while.

You definitely have a good ear for dialogue and narration, and this was a VERY pleasurable read.

I'll be taking this fic to my bunk tonight. Thanks for writing and posting. :)

[maquisleader]

Thanks! It's always a little nerve wracking getting into a new fandom, but smut helps, right? lol

I'm glad you enjoyed it, would you like me to send Tony over with something dirty to keep you company? ;)

[stephiel]

Oh, absolutely yes, please... and I promise to return him in "good" condition, too. :)

[southerngirl90]

Oh yeah This is why I felt something was missing in the movie. It needed more PLAYBOY TONY. He should have fucked Natalie or at least do something! But he acted kinda like a nervous virgin when she approached him in that scene. That was not very Tony Stark. You did some justice here bb. I like your writting a lot!

[maquisleader]

Hey, thanks, I appreciate the kind words! There's a missing scene that's in one of the trailers where they're a lot more comfortable with each other, and she's in a different dress. I decided that her comment on the martini just had to be a come on, I mean, he's sexy as hell! lol

Thanks again!

[never_composed]

That was AMAZING!
There is a serious lack of Tony Stark PWP around... (or at least I can't find it ha) and this was EXACTLY what I was looking for! Perfect, scorching, and did I mention fucking sexy as hell?! Thank you for writing this!

[maquisleader]

I haven't been able to find a lot of smutty Tony fic, either. I have been reading a series by dracutgrl called A Kink In The Armor. She's posting it in chapters and making me crazy.

Thx for the feedback, I'm glad you liked it!