(fan fiction) Xanadu (Comfort Zone)

[maplarojcan]

Xanadu (Comfort Zone) 
HSJ, ChinenxOkamoto
fluff, humor
pg

for hotfruits :)

Comments

[hotfruits]

FIRST BECAUSE IT'S MIIIIIINEEEEEEEEE

[hotfruits]

Onto the review :D

SO CUTE! And really natural too, like I could imagine seeing these events actually happen. Great flow, great grammar, JUST AMAZING TY BB ♥

[maplarojcan]

ahaha. :) i have another one im posting in a few minutes. :)

*huggles tight* you do know you're crazy right? :) you reply so fast! :) hahahaha! :)

thank you so much!! :) i actually just finished this one... an hour ago? WAHAHA. :) iluuuu

[hotfruits]

YAAAAAAAAAAY :D

Hahaha I'm a creeper as hell *stalks you*
Looooove you ♥

It's amazing bb, like everything you write. And it was for me, and OkaChii! *SQUEES*

[ichiban_seiyaku]

That was cute... (^_^)
It's amazing how Keito can sense what Chinen needs...hahaha

[maplarojcan]

hahha thank you! :) *huggles tight* :)

well. :) keito is a genius. :) di ko alam. :) when i yell like that people just know i've lost something like my wallet. or my cellphone. :) hahahaha!

[chii_loves_me]

nice. i really love it when keito gets paired up with anybody!

[maplarojcan]

:) keito is a sweetheart. period.:)

[chii_loves_me]

love♥love♥love♥love♥love
keito is love. xD

[maplarojcan]

:) hahahaha he really is a sweetheart. ^^;;

[suteii]

CUUUUTTEEE weird but Cute. I loved it

[maplarojcan]

XD i've been lacking angst lately. this was supposed to be angst too but i just couldn't do it.

[hyuuchiha_miki]

Okamoto decides to stand his ground, he needs to get answers. He takes in a deep breath, "why don't you like me?"
Poor thing to misunderstand Chinen! XD and to be ignored too

Chinen's head turns sharply towards the two of them, "I heard that." He calls out dangerously and Morimoto and Yamada freeze. Yamada is the first to grasp the situation and runs for dear life. Chinen edges closer to Morimoto before Okamoto steps in. Chinen's angry stare turns soft and Chinen immediately forgets about Morimoto.

"Ah. Young love." Nakajima comments with a warm smile on his face.
A scary Chinen transformed after Keito appears. So cute!

This is nice ^^b

[maplarojcan]

hahahaha! :) well that's what love does to you? haha! sorry! i forgot to comment to this after seeing it. :)