first fic in English EVER! for the Chyan Community

[maomarty]

Title: Shower of love
Rating: K (so plain...but it's the first one, I don't want to scare you away! >Summary: even the most embarassing situation fades when there's his lover involved

Comments

[coloursofsouls]

I liked this a lot! good job!

and yes America has boilers, often referred to as a hot water heater hahaha.

[maomarty]

I'm ignorant.
But thank you anyway.
You are my God, you know that, right?
Even if this avatar of yours is really creepy.
I prefer the 'rape' one.*nods*

[coloursofsouls]

lmao if u prefer the rape one then i dunno what to think about you XD

[maomarty]

oh, you have NO idea.
I'm a really dangerous person *evil grin*

[desinere]

Nice job! This was very cute. :)

Keep up the good work, and definitely write more!

[maomarty]

Thank you so much!! *blushes* I think I'm gonna cry.
You are all so nice to me!! *runs away*

[veecious]

1. Aww. Aww, and you know it. Even if, OMB JUST READ HSM FANFICTION SHAME ON ME. I had to ask my sister who was who and she kindly pointed the two of the on her poster.
2. Mercy? What mercy? It's not like you can't write in English. I didn't even know you never tried it.
3. 'kay, now. THERE'S HSM FANFICTION ON YOUR LJ AND I CAN'T READ ANY BANDOM FIC AROUND HERE. WHY? MEAN MEAN MEAN WIFE. GO AND WRITE AND PLEASE ME. NOW.

[maomarty]

squeee ><
so you liked it, right?
first attempt, first success, yay!
now I'll just have to complete all the challenges and succeed at them as well, then, MAYBE, bandslash.
we'll see.

[mugglerock]

Awww, that was really cute! I liked it a lot! Good job! And you did damn good considering English isn't your first language, hell, I've read terrible fics written by people who only speak english. XD!

[maomarty]

you're lovely and I adore you.*giggles*
I'm really happy you liked it, now I'm preparing the next one but I warn you: it won't be this fluffy...I'm an angst writer, even if in the end I always need my happy ending (or sort of)...