[FIC]~STAY WITH ME~

[maomaochan]

Title: Stay With Me
Couple: DaiMao (Watanabe Daisuke x Hamao Kyousuke)
Genre: Fluffy/Cute
Word Count: a little over 2800 words (not too bad, but it was supposed to be shorter, oh well LOL)

Summary:
Mao thinks his date with Daisuke is completely ruined when he wakes up extremely sick one morning, but when his older lover shows up at his door, well, you

Comments

[maomaochan]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! ^^

[nishkido]

I'm not that good in writing fic ~jealous. English is my second language , beside, I'm not good in writing descriptive stories.. your imagination is WOW

[maomaochan]

Really? *blushes* Haha I'm not really a good writer at all xP And my imagination is rather short, because all of these Daimao fics always seem to end in the same way or have a similar theme LOL But thank you! *HUGS* I appreciate you saying that, it gives me hope that my writing is somewhat improving. And it really makes me happy that you like the story and the writing style X33

[ever_mea]

oh, I love it. a detailed description.
I like the fact that mao always wants to be a man when being in public, but daichan just wants him to reply on daichan and just be himself in front of his lover.
When I saw the last part of your story I picture something in my mind, it is that Gii hugs takumi from the back and they are lying in the bed. So sweet!

[maomaochan]

Yep yep exactly :)) Mao doesn't want to be treated like a child, but Daisuke just wants him to know that he doesn't have to be strong around him. But also, liked the conflicting thoughts of Mao, cause he secretly likes to be pampered by Daisuke, so he is still a child at heart ne? ;DD

Haha I had the same image when I pictured him, only more to side than leaning up against the pillow ^_^

Yay I'm glad you liked it^^ Thanks for reading! *hugs*

[anncho]

Awwww...*giggles like retard person*....THIS IS CHOOOOOOOOOO CUTE...*giggles more like an idiot*....

I like it, no, i love it...*fangirling over dai/mao*....I want them to be real couple now, so much...hehehehe...*prays to god*...lol...hahaha..

Keep on writting..*smiles and raises two thumbs up*....^____^...

[maomaochan]

Yaaay! I'm so happy you liked it tomodachi! *huggles* XDDD

I was hoping for the cute and fluffy element so I'm glad it came through and I'm glad they seem kinda like they would do in real life ^V^
Me too! I want them to be a real couple so bad too! They really need to just admit to themselves and get together! And have cute moments like this, video tape it, and send it to us fans LOL ;DD

Okay I will! Thank you so much for reading *more hugs*
And I'm almost done with your jealous fic. I hope it comes out okay tho :)) Is there any moment in it that you like to be put into the story? Like what situation are you imagining for Daisuke's jealousy moment? Just curious :33

And how is Konbini-kun? Do you like it? ^^

[anncho]

*giggles and claps hand*....me too, i want them to get married soon...lol...and show us fan's their wedding picts and videos...lolol...hahaha..*pervy mind*...

0.0 *stares*....lol...hahaha..
Okie, i was thinking like this: mao gets really attached to baba ryoma and he keeps on talking to him, almost ignoring daisuke. But he doesn't do it intentionally. Daisuke tries to talk to mao, but mao keeps on talking to baba and that some what pisses daisuke off. And to make it as a twist, you can make baba like mao as well, so that there be a competition between baba and daisuke for mao...XDDDD.... Lol...that's my imagination...[looks at you with kitty's eyes...lol]....

I didn't read it yet....i can't go online on Lappy, so i'm using phone...so...well...i don't know yet...but i'll read it soon, can't wait any more....hahahahaha

[maomaochan]

Me too! That wedding would be awesome! I would fly to Japan right now to see that, even tho I'm a poor college student right now LOL
Hehehe me too! I want to see those pics and vids. Esp I would love to see that honeymoon night! *DROOLS* haha

Okay I'll do that! :))) It reminds me of how flirty Baba was with Mao on Pure-Making Of ;DD I'll think I'll use that moment to get Daisuke jealous and Daisuke is mad at himself for being jealous because Baba is his friend but he can't help it because Mao is talking with another guy that is not him hehehe! ^____^ I like it! So I'll make it like that then ;DD thank you for telling me, now I have the ideas flowing through my head better now lol
I'll get on that then! I'll try to get it done ASAP! ;DDD

Alrighty then. I understand :)) Whenever you can finish it is fine, jus tell me what you thinik of it when you're done k? Can't wait to hear what you think of it ;33

[mystical_powers]

AWWW! KYAAA! *dies*
I want a drawing of this!! xD
I was amused by the way you describe him like faceplanting the floor xD haha seen him naked multiple times... I can never watch Takumi-kun the same way again, I always just assumed that had boxers on underneath the covers no matter what xD Hehehehe *evil*

[maomaochan]

Really? You like it? Yay I'm so happy! XDD
I do too. Man, I wish I had some drawing skills Dx

Haha yea poor Mao! I gave him a tough time when writing this *pats pats* But I also laughed to myself imagining him falling to floor like that, and so I just had to put that in, so I'm glad you liked that part ;DD
LOL I always like to imagine nothing was underneath esp after the 3rd movie *DROOLS* And I also hope they have had "other" chances to see each other naked as well...if you know what I mean @___@ *pervy thoughts abrewing* HAHA

Thank you so much for reading! Your comment was buckets of awesome! *HUGGLES*

[mystical_powers]

Wish I had drawing skills too! All you'll get is stick men out of me xD

After the third film?! I shall rewatch it and 'look' haha xD

No problem =D
I started writing my fic last night and got about 3000 words in two hours =/

[maomaochan]

Haha me too! Stick man are as far as my artistic ability goes LOL

Oh I meant, during the love scene at the end. I kept imagining them not having anything underneath during that scene. I don't know why since it never goes below their waists but I just loved to imagine them not having shorts on in that last scene *hehehe*

That's awesome! XDD 3000 words is pretty amazing in 2 hours! This fic above is not even 3000 words and it took me the whole day to finish LOL so you're off to great start! I can't wait to read it when you're done! XDDD
How long do you want to make it? :))