Comments | manonmaru: Life in Spite of God 4

manonmaru

Life in Spite of God 4

Jun 29, 2006 12:38

No, I've resigned myself now. There is a freedom in taking what you want, as long as you don't ever allow yourself to think about....the consequences. One day we will all reap the consequences of our actions, even Iris, we are all living out our little fantasies, indulging in the wicked desires of our malignant hearts. And each of us is dressing ( Read more... )

smut, iris crowe, love, carnivale, incest, justin crowe

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twinb80 July 1 2006, 06:06:02 UTC

Oh I really like this piece here. There is more coming, right? :)

manonmaru July 1 2006, 21:36:14 UTC

You really like it? I'm still really unsure in the Justin voice. Thanks for reading.

twinb80 July 3 2006, 07:14:58 UTC

Your welcome.

I like the quiet moments between them when history is spoken instead of words. You are almost there with Justin's voice. Personally for me its Vorona and Drea who always nail his voice and make him believable and in character. Elizabeth does an awesome job in "Together" and she needs to write more. LOL.

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Re: Wipes brow gingerly manonmaru July 31 2006, 16:42:02 UTC

Thanks for your comments Amy, they mean a lot to me.

Whew...wipes brow gingerly onecrowesorrow July 28 2006, 21:29:23 UTC

That whole story was delectable! Bravo!