Love's Revenge Chapter 6

Feb 13, 2011 17:56


a/n: I kept on apologizing about me being late in updating so let's change that for a while. So I updated as an early Valentines Day gift for you all. Since I will be having a date with Trigonometry tomorrow (our longtest in on the day after  Valentines), I won't be able to update tomorrow. Warning for there might be confusions and grammatical ( Read more... )

rating: pg15, pairing:onew/key, !fanfic, title: love's revenge, via ljapp

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manongeunhyuk February 13 2011, 10:21:21 UTC
Spot for kitariii

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kitariii February 18 2011, 07:03:20 UTC
DUN DUN DUNNNNNN
bb, that confession was epic, like i said when we were at school lol
I'm glad to see that Onew and Key are togetharrr now but then, Jonghyun seems like a threat eh B(
BUT IT'S OKAY I LIKE THE SUSPENSE~

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manongeunhyuk February 20 2011, 08:28:04 UTC
Well you'll see if Jonghyun is really the threat. Lmao I only remembered about our conversation on how perfect Lee Jinki is. Maybe the confession was epic because it's not common. People prefer something that has a romantic feel even from the start.

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manongeunhyuk February 13 2011, 10:21:51 UTC
Spot for hellonurul

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manongeunhyuk February 15 2011, 14:23:45 UTC
I'm flattered that you find this exciting. I didn't mean to do that and hope I could update fast with chapter 7. :D
Yeah Onkey is TOGEDAH FOREVAH now!!! ♥

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manongeunhyuk February 13 2011, 10:24:14 UTC
Spot for adyaby

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adyaby February 15 2011, 02:49:51 UTC
thank u for the spot! ^^

omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg *hyperventilating*
waaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! *i'm jumping all over my house* xD
i'm happy! they kissed & they're together now!! :'D
now i know why kibummie was crying xP
u made me so happy today ^^

who is this bad person?? Dx
but at least they're happy... for now @_@

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manongeunhyuk February 15 2011, 14:28:02 UTC
Awww I'm glad that this made your day :) And regarding the bad person you'll know it soon on the latter chapters. Yeah Onkey is together now :)

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melalocket February 13 2011, 11:13:59 UTC
spoot <3

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melalocket February 13 2011, 11:26:16 UTC
Little did I know that a person was watching us from afar, his face wearing a smirk and muttering some words about me.

His words were all about revenge.

is that jjong???
did he want to make revenge to key??
did jini have some thing to do with it? well ihope not ~
key will be really sad :(

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manongeunhyuk February 15 2011, 14:30:47 UTC
Well regarding the person who wants revenge, you'll find that soon on the next chapters. And about Jinki also too. Thanks for reading :) ♥

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rinni1905 February 13 2011, 13:49:05 UTC
Ah, why did I feel so bliss now, thanks to you. Woohoo, I love this so much, especially the confessing scene. Why did it have to be so cute? But oh well, I think it was a little suspicious since Jinki alway appeared so right on time like that. And the ending isn't helping much, I'm pretty sure the one who wanted to take revenge is Jjong, just don't know what he is going to do then. I hope I could read about Kibum's past soon, I'm quite curious about what he did.

But geez, I think I will be worry about that in the next chapter, right now I just focus on the fact that OnKey just kissed. Keke, oh, was the one in the library with Jinki Taemin? Aigoo, I hope there won't be much complicated triangle relationship afterwards. I can't wait to read the next chap. I feel so happy reading this because finally, some authors released worth-reading OnKey fic. Fighting with the next chap!

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manongeunhyuk February 15 2011, 15:35:07 UTC
Your comment made me smile. I'm flattered that you find my writings worth of read. I'm not that even good at this yet but you appreciate it so thank you :)
Well as of the person who wants to take revenge on Key, you'll find it out soon on the latter chapters and also Jinki's background.
Thanks for reading :) ♥

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