10 (Betrayal).
She waited for him by the side of the lake, dressed in layers of clothing to keep the cold away. When the young man approached, she didn’t even glance at him as she spoke. “Jaime,” her fingers slowly brushed a stray lock of hair away from her eyes, “I was supposed to go… I… I didn’t think you’d come.”
“I love you Elise, and that’s all that matters. ( Read more... )
“I love you Elise, and that’s all that matters. ( Read more... )
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This is great!
But I guess you already knew I'd say that. =P
But seriously. It's wonderful. The only thing that confused me... or made me really curious was the hair Elise was stroking at her elbow. Is it a child's hair or a dog's... um... fur? Or is her elbow hairy, hehe.
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yep. typical of me to misread something like that, hehe.
It makes perfect sense with 'eyebrow.' =D
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