locked pearl (4/?)

[mankadi]

Title: Locked Pearl (chapter 4)
Author: mankadi  
Pairing: OnKey (Fututred: HyunMin and slightly, JongKey and 2min.)
Genre: Romance, angst (for now?!)
Rating: PG-13 (?!)
Summary: Everything changed in Kibum's life the moment HE appeared at the doorway of his house.
Warning: Un-Beta-Ed! D:
Chapters: 1 l 2 l 3 l

Comments

[mankadi]

*spot for my lovely unnie mumuja
Yeobo (im stilly our hubby right? :3) I LOVE YOU SO MUCH :)
and thanks for everything really :")
-huggles- <3

[mankadi]

spot for rinni1905 unnie :)
thank you so much for being a loyal reader and giving me so much love~
wo ai ni jiejie :"D
(thats all i know to say in chinese)
hope you still want that spot ><
<33

[rinni1905]

哈哈. 我也爱你, 妹妹. 謝謝.

That's mean I love you too, dongsaengie, thank you. I love your fic and I love you too. Keke. After so much waiting, now I can read your update. I've waited for this new chap, because I really want to know what will happen next.

Poor Kibum, it must have been hard for him to be alone like that all the time. I really want to thank Jjong for keeping him alive and now he can start to move on his own. Jinki is such a jerk, did him know that Kibum had to endure all those terrible things alone, while he was happy with his wife? I hope Jjong will confront him, and tell Jinki the truth, or it could be Taeminie. :)

Omo, why did Kibum does that with Jjong? Is he just want to imagine that was Jinki? But now it is a really serious problem now. If I were Jinki, seeing Kibum like that, I would be really angry and jump to the conclusion immediately. You did cliffhanger *cry*.

Plz update this soon! I can't wait to know what'll happen next.

[rinni1905]

Kekeke, I can write smut, rough one and constantly. But I can only write in my own language, so I'm unable to help you much. But let me have a little suggestion for you

[mankadi]

spot for owlbee hope you stil want it unnie ><
<33~

[owlbee]

of course i still want it!! *grab it* :D
-goes to read-

OH.MY.GOSH.
this.
just.
gosh.
there's so many question jumbled in my mind after i read this chapter, my brain start to hurt by thinking on it..and i know there's no use i uttered it here, since you would only answer it on the next chapters..T_T

gahh..now i should thinking something resolving to distract myself from dying for your next update, ottokeee!?

-.-
to sum up my incoherent comment up there :
GREAT UPDATE BB!!! *thumbs up*
my waiting is so worth it -huggles-

ps: if you got some Onkey rough-smut later, share with unnie kay. i want it too *wails* xD

[mankadi]

spot for those who asked and i forgot to spot ><
(im real sorry ;__;)
or for everyone who wants to spot here :"D

[mankadi]

of course you can silly :")
<333

[boogie14]

MY SPOT

[boogie14]

first of all, unnie i deeply opologize for not reading this AWESOME FIC beforee!
i had to read all 4 chapters before commenting!! and it was not easy! my sister kept snatching the laptop away!! or looking at me while i was using it. I can't read when other people's are looking! it's disturbing! D:
ehem...i may say everything i have to say from every chap here, hope you don't mind

Anyways!! THIS IS AMAZING UNNIEE!♥♥♥
i still got some questions, like ...how can Kibummie get pregnat? but oh! well, it's your story i'll let it be, becuase it's amazing like that!

And noooh! i love Jinki way too much, but here! he's such a jeerk! it makes me want to slap him a little util he learns how to properly treat Kibummiee! D:

Poor Taeminiee! what exactly happen to him? how come he ended up alone and abandoned in the streeet??
And Jonghunnye, i love him for being there with Kibummie when he needed him, but i don't aprove Jongkey that much...

please! make beutiful Onkey together soon! (:

LOVE YA UNNIE!♥♥♥♥
and i'm reallly absolutely sorry for not