Comments | maniacalshen: Fic: Diluna 3/3

maniacalshen

Fic: Diluna 3/3

Mar 26, 2011 12:21

Title: Diluna
Author: Shen
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Nine, Rose
Summary: The Doctor and Rose land on a quiet planet with a genial people. But something lurks in the shadows of their sleepy streets. Action/adventure, just a hint of Romance
Author's Note: Written for emraldeyedauter for her very generous donation to helpbrazil2011 . Many thanks to othermewriter for beta reading. Thanks to ( Read more... )

fic, ninefic, doctor who

Comments 14

othermewriter March 26 2011, 17:31:51 UTC

Very sweet. A delight to read both times around.

maniacalshen March 26 2011, 18:03:23 UTC

Thank you. :)

bloose09 March 26 2011, 19:18:34 UTC

I really liked that Rose was so brave and saved the day.The Doctor was so proud of her too.

A very good story and an interesting alien species to boot.

maniacalshen March 26 2011, 20:25:53 UTC

Thank you! And I'm so glad you liked the aliens. I put some thought into them.

canaana March 26 2011, 23:45:03 UTC

Terrific finish. The ending is just right.

Well, bravado, and a genius brain, and several backup plans, and he at least would know if these actually were important pieces of the ship. Shit.

Hee hee. I love Rose doing the best with what she's got ... even as she knows that what she's got could use some improvement. Rock on.

maniacalshen March 27 2011, 01:28:37 UTC

Thanks! I'd hoped to strike a good balance for the ending. And I'm happy you like my Rose; I was slightly worried about people's interpretations of her insane plan.

kilodalton March 27 2011, 04:53:43 UTC

Awww! This was adorable! I really liked it =)

maniacalshen March 27 2011, 14:26:59 UTC

Thank you!

housemaid79 March 27 2011, 08:43:58 UTC

I really enjoyed this! You made it feel like an actual episode - striking just the right balance between adventure and romance.

maniacalshen March 27 2011, 14:27:30 UTC

Sweet; that's exactly what I was going for! I appreciate you saying so. :)