Comments | mangalover93: Slow in some areas, fast in others [GRi

mangalover93

Slow in some areas, fast in others [GRi - OneShot]

Oct 11, 2009 15:28

Seung Ri slowly walked out of the car and took his only belongings with him, which wasn’t much. A little bag with clothes. The taxi driver drove off right away and let him standing in front of an old, little and gray house. The house was lonely, surrounded by a few trees that have had better lives.

So this was were people like him were taken to, ( Read more... )

#oneshot, #challenge: 30 big bang, 08: slow in some areas fast in others, p: ji yong/seung ri

Comments 21

yenikal October 12 2009, 14:45:47 UTC

hehehehehehe I love Seunfri's power and Jiyoung was so cur here ^^

yenikal October 12 2009, 14:46:21 UTC

SeUNGRI xdddddd I write it bad TT___TT

haelin October 22 2009, 07:44:19 UTC

SPOTTAGE!

haelin October 22 2009, 07:55:02 UTC

OOOH I LIKE THIS DONGSAENG! MORRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEE I WANT MORE OF THESE!

yuki801 February 2 2010, 19:08:59 UTC

WoW, this idea was great! I especially liked Ri's power. What was TOP's and Taeyang's power? i know that Daesung can see the future and Ji Yong can be invisible.

mangalover93 February 2 2010, 19:14:30 UTC

hehehe, I love supernatural stuff so I guess I have to make my special boys extra special xP
Top's power is sonic scream and Taeyang's is teleporting xP

leeseungri February 5 2010, 15:00:57 UTC

KISS ME!!!!!!!!

i think both G and RI is horny!! ekekekekekke..

wonderful stories...i tried to write GRi with superpowers but as always I fail! hohoohoho

Thanks for writing GRI!!!!!!!!!!!!!