Our First Kiss [GRi - OneShot]

Oct 07, 2009 00:07

I opened the door widely and nearly slammed it right into Seung Ri who was right behind me startling him, but I couldn’t care less. It was his fault anyway. Why did he always move away, avoid me when I was trying to kiss him? Did Seung Ri find me so disgusting that he didn’t want to kiss me?

I lay on the bed and covering my head with the pillow. ( Read more... )

f: big bang, #challenge: 30 big bang, 11: our first kiss, p: ji yong/seung ri

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aishiteru_amie October 7 2009, 07:40:52 UTC
who said you're writing become poorer?
i love this!
it's cute and happy.
you gimme my happy dose for today.
so thank you!!

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mangalover93 October 7 2009, 21:28:43 UTC
I don't know, lack of comments and confident ;P
thank you for loving it :D
and your comment gives me my happy dose ^^
you're welcome ^^

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vaneszikkipower October 7 2009, 11:25:12 UTC
i liked it sweetie!!
Really cute.
I love how Ji catched Seungri... and how they fell together.
That is their first kiss in one year? What a loss lol.
but their first kiss and Ri's already moaning, lol.

So cuuuuute bb!
thanks so much :)

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mangalover93 October 7 2009, 21:30:27 UTC
Thank you for liking it :D
yeah, i thought it might be hard for ji to kiss him intensely in a catching position xP lol
yup a big loss and ri has to make up for it ;P
haha xD ji going all out at the beginning ^^

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blushemphasises October 8 2009, 13:04:08 UTC
Awww so cute! lovin the fluff 8D

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mangalover93 October 8 2009, 13:07:33 UTC
thanks :D
me loves gri fluff, but angst is good too ;P

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blushemphasises October 8 2009, 13:32:45 UTC
hehehe

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yourmyfantasy October 10 2009, 20:46:04 UTC
NOOOO your writing didnt get worse -_- IT GOT BETTER UNNIE!!!!!!!!!!(((((((:!!!!
AND OMG,
THIS WAS SOOO CUTE ! XD!
How ri wanted the kiss to be special is awwwwww:3
Jiyong loves his little panda so much! xD

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ani_ami January 26 2010, 13:41:17 UTC
panda pout rules LOL

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