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yourmyfantasy April 17 2009, 14:47:51 UTC
YEAH!!! THE GIRL HAS TO LEAVE (:<
yes get up and leave now. move it. MOVE IT.
andand,
POOR JIYONGGG! D:
keeping all his emotions inside. ); tell ri how you feeel! ):
and L.O.L at t.o.p only thinking about food HAHAHA!
cant wait for part 5! <3

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mangalover93 April 17 2009, 15:04:58 UTC
I'm writing it now :D probably up tomorrow
hehe had to write something funny too, :P Guess TOP was the best choice

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kuro_wolf April 17 2009, 14:52:26 UTC
Just read chap 3 and now this! OMG!
Poor Ri and stupid stupid GD!
Stupid!

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mangalover93 April 17 2009, 14:55:54 UTC
hehe thank you for reading and commenting <3 :D

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vangelynn April 17 2009, 14:59:11 UTC
^ how did those guys get ahead of me >:( ?!! %*$%$!
SPOT ^_^ I'm starving

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vangelynn April 18 2009, 02:06:55 UTC
I know you waited a long time =D I had no time because my family and I had to go some where. But I was meaning to comment at tonight (which is now!!). ^_^

He could feel his anger raising.

*cheers Taeyang on* =D

“Kwon Ji Yong, you better explains and cleans this mess,” he yells and both of them got up quickly while Taeyang walks out to the living-room.

*Stands up and yells like maniac in hockey game* WOOO!!HOOOO!

“Sorry but I guess you have to leave now.” Ji Yong says to the girl casually. The girl just nods, collecting her stuff and left.

At least she's a good sport :P

“What and why you ask?!” Taeyang raises his voice for each word. “Why did you bring a girl here you know we are NOT allow to do that? I bet you have been lying there whole day without doing nothing."

*voice goes hoarse* Justice! Justice! <3

“I miss him.” Ji Yong says nearly whispers.

*heart stops* O_O

“I said I MISS HIM! I miss joking with him. I miss talking with him. I miss teasing him. I miss holding him in my arms. I miss seeing him smile.” Ji Yong babbles on ( ... )

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mangalover93 April 18 2009, 11:39:10 UTC
It is worth waiting for your comment :D
I'm glad you like Daesung this way :) I tried to make him funny :D
I too have read Seung Hyun as *I-don'y-care* so decided that I should change him a bit, and at the same time try to make him funny/weird.

Well except for Ji Yong's missing part. I've tried to make this chapter less sad than the others.

I'm sure you look pretty ;P
Thank you for reading and commenting :D <3 Love ya
*VERY BIG HUG*

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yuki_dizon April 17 2009, 15:20:58 UTC
GAH. Dear, this was A-MA-ZIIIING! And BEAUTIFUL. And LOVELY. I use those words too often, lulz. But I mean them. Honestly, truly, from the bottom of my heaaart! I simply love this story. I hope you update again soon! *panda hug!*

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mangalover93 April 17 2009, 15:31:53 UTC
aww thank you for the kind words, really makes me happy :D I'll try to update soon :D
*koala hug*

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