Eve

[mandy_croyance]

Christmas has come early! Well, Christmas fic at any rate. ;)

Thanks to all those who provided encouragement and a special thanks to pluginxbaby for the quick beta. This was a departure from what I normally write so I appreciate any critical feedback people may want to give (especially on characterization and style).

EvePG // 1770 words // Untrue

Comments

[lets_go_to_rome]

gawwwwww.

that's adorable. :3

and you were fine on the characterizations, i thought.

more?

[mandy_croyance]

:D Thanks

And no, no more. I should have specified that it was a one-shot.

[mandy_croyance]

Thank you! I appreciate the detailed feedback. I'm not really overly familiar with FOB canon so writing Pete had me second guessing myself quite a bit.

<3

Christmas is lovely at any time of year.

[lyo]

This is awesome and just lovely. The Ryan/Pete stuff was just bittersweet enough, and then kisses in the snow. Adorable.

[mandy_croyance]

Yes. I didn't want to let the Ryan/Pete get too angsty because this is essentially fluff, lol. I'm glad you enjoyed the kisses in the snow :)

[zebraqueenjj]

Awww that was adorable! I loved it! You're a good writer

[mandy_croyance]

Thank you :D

[sleeperxhit]

I love the Ryan/Pete dynamic, how hard they're trying. And Jon's so sweet, as always. He's one of my favorite characters to read and you write him well.

Uhm, I think, maybe? You meant Miracle on 34th Street, or possibly Nightmare on Elm Street [which isn't very Christmas-y but it's totally a Pete move to watch it anyway] unless there is a Miracle on Elm Street and I just didn't know about it. Which happens, quite often.

Whatever, I loved this.

Love.

[mandy_croyance]

Oh, lord, I think you're right. I can't believe none of my friends who read this before I posted caught that. Thank you so much for pointing it out.

And thanks for reading. I love that you loved it :D