Poem!!!!

[mandapandabug]

totally inspired by Susiegrl!!!! because she posted her first thing... and it was a poem, and i was talking to her, and... now i want to post something and to stop being some creepy lurker

Comments

[susiegrl]

*cheers* you wrote a poem *^-^*
wah~ it rhymes!~ so cool!~
but last line is my supposed to be may??
anyways i can totally get how Yunho feels~
love it!!!~~

[mandapandabug]

woopys... i didn't read through it because i just wanted to put my first post in to bad! i went too fast... yes may.. not my... a mistake on such a short entry... dang nabit! well THANK YOU! for being awesome again! i hope everyone knows how he feels... well... not personally, but they understand ^_~ don't want anyone to actually go through any of that pain!

[mandapandabug]

fixed it!!!! XP you should be my unofficial beta!!!! just kidding (though you are so good at it ^_^) thank you for commenting and †he love and telling me of my mistake. GO YOU!!!!

[susiegrl]

heheh
so are you going to be writing something else soon?
if you are I would love to read it ^^

[cereza_gakuto]

awww~~
so cute *-*

YunHo wanna dance with Jae
that mean he wanna be with jae, right?

:D

take care =*

[mandapandabug]

he wants to be with Jae so hard!!!! ^_^ in my mind... (and in real life XP)

you take take too! peace and love to ya'!!

thanks for commenting! i feel so loved.

[spudacus_1]

awwww thats a really cute/nice poem! :D ehehhe
i thought that it was more about Jae loving Yunho though eheh i think it was the dancing hehehe, although the boo bit seemed like Yunho ehheeh but it was nice thanks!

[mandapandabug]

it could have been... XD even if i didn't intend it. whatever you thought while you read it is right. that's how i like to write.

thanks... THANK YOU!!! for commenting! i feel loved!! peace and love to you!!!

[kawaiineyo4]

I was thinking about being unsure about feeling love for the first time, because isn't that what love is, it's like a dance between two people, you're either going to dance well, or you're going to dance bad! But atleast you tried and that was all that matters!

I read it more like a song, I use to write poems all the time! This was really pretty, and I love things that rhyme! <333!

[mandapandabug]

that's deep. and totally right!! because no answer is wrong,... unless they say DBSK sucks... then they are so freakin' wrong that you should explode. because they rock too much. thank you for ... commenting. that makes me all happy on the inside. ^_^^_^_^