Complicated as Love

[manaika]

Fanfic: Complicated as Love
Music inspired: Everytime we touch, slow version (Cascada), Jet Airliner (Modern Talking), Thunder (East 17)
Genre: Shounen-ai/yaoi
Pairing: Ichigo x Keigo
Rating: NC-17/M because of later chapters
Warning: Graphic citrus (lemon and lime) in later chapters.
Summary: Puberty is hard, isn’t it? More then when you’re a substitute

Comments

[animaven]

I like the way you tell your story. The words bring me into the scene as though I was really there. Have you ever thought of using a Beta to help you proof read etc. It could be helpful for you.

[manaika]

I did and I had a few fics beta'ed. However I have terrible expieriences with it. It kinda made them loose their touch. And since people who read fanfiction are from different corners of the world, with different knowledge of english, I figured that it isn't really such a problem. No offense against englishman (in new york...ooh oh I'm an alli- sorry about that. It happens), but you'll have to cope. (Also I'll have you know that I didn't have english lessons for two years now and my english teachers knew neither english nor slovak (my native language), so for that I consider my english skills high enough. I speak fluently and even if my grammar isn't the best - I won't get lost. But that's besides the point now

[darkbombayangel]

It's very good so far. Really like it. ^-^

[manaika]

Thanks! ^^