Complicated as Love

[manaika]

Fanfic: Complicated as Love
Music inspired: Everytime we touch, slow version (Cascada), Jet Airliner (Modern Talking), Thunder (East 17)
Genre: Shounen-ai/yaoi
Pairing: Ichigo x Keigo
Rating: NC-17/M because of later chapters
Warning: Graphic citrus (lemon and lime) in later chapters.
Summary: Puberty is hard, isn’t it? More then when you’re a substitute

Comments

[bittersweet_mis]

I really like the plot, this is the first Ichigo/Keigo fic Iread and I must say I was pleasantly surprised.

I liked the fact that both ichigo and keigo didn't leap into sex, and are also actually thinking about how they're gonna waltz out of the closet. It's rather refreshing!

Unfortunately there are a few problems with spelling and grammar (Maybe you should invest in a beta). But even then, your level of english is really impressive seeing as it's not your mother tongue (I'm assuming from your profile page)

I can't wait to see how this goes! ^^

[manaika]

Yeah, it isn't and thanks ^^
But most of them are probably typing errors. But I have problems with the tenses in english (with probably another 5 miliards of people).

I'm happy you like the plot.
*huggles*