Hakuouki fanfiction - Hijikata/Saitou: "Poem for you", part 3

[manaika]

Title: Poem for you
Author: manaika
Series: Hakuouki, between Reimeiroku and Shinsengumi Kitan
Pairing: HijiSai, with a bakatrio threesome and hints of Kondo/Okita and past Tani/Sano on the sideline.
Rating: PG-15 and up. Varies between chapters, but only one is really for Mature Audience, I’ll warn you in time. (IMO 17 and 16 years old would cope, but

Comments

[tokio_fujita]

No problem. My brain even automatically converted Saitou's lines to Japanese and dubbed them with Toriumi's voice as I read. XD

I lol-ed at Saitou's conclusion of why Shinpachi told him to take a bath. That was so unexpected and tennen moe. Yet it makes sense, since Saitou tends to reflect himself and thinks over if he did something wrong.

"Shinpachi had always been more perceptive than people gave him credit for." That's so true! It's a shame that he doesn't have a route and he only gets developed in Sano route (main game) or Saitou route (Reimeiroku).

I lol-ed again when Sano told Hijikata that Saitou invited him to join him in the bath. XDDD At first I thought gosh can't you be less straightforward? Than I see he's doing so to observe Hijikata's reactions. Good job!

BTW I like the way you describe the spar in detail. Most fanfics skip this kind of scene and only want to spend time on icha-icha stuff. XD

[manaika]

Really?! Wow! xD