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Hakuoki fanfic: The Shinsengumi family

Oct 31, 2012 18:26

Name: Shinsengumi Family
Author: manaika
Fandom: Hakuoki
Word count: 4277 + 3919 (it could be actually considered my „less than 5000 words per part“ challenge)
Rating: PG-15?
Warnings: Uh...gender swap, I suppose? Cursing and questionable education methods? AU
Notes: You know like in Prince of Tennis there were these Chibi episodes with the Seishun family? ( Read more... )

hakuoki shinsengumi kitan, fanfic, hakuoki

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jolinar773 October 31 2012, 21:40:13 UTC

Lol, it's good to read something funny once in a while XD Except a few spelling mistakes and such, it's great.
But when I reached the family dinner and there was "Itouko" I was like, "wait a sec, why the name sounds familiar?"... and they I added a face to it...
and god I'm still laughing my head off XD
Thanks!

manaika October 31 2012, 21:51:38 UTC

*gg* Thank you!
I wrote the most of it today, so around the half of the fanfic, the errors get more frequent. I just didn't have the time anymore... v_v
But I'm glad you liked it. *snicker*
Yeah, Itouko. I thoud he...I meant SHE would make a perfect wife for Sannan, so...yeah.
And Genko is actually Inoue Gen-san.
And I think you were able to guess the others. xD

I'm happy you enjoyed it and thank for the comment! ^^

jolinar773 October 31 2012, 22:06:39 UTC

Ah, Genko! Didn't realize that...
But yeah, I got the others, though it took me a while before I realized Saigo = Saitou XD...
and Kazama's "Marry me!" lines competed very well with Itouko! XD
Only shame Shiranui didn't get to kill the vampire XD
Should have know it was him the moment there was his "Yo, Mrs.Coach" XD

jolinar773 October 31 2012, 22:11:06 UTC

Although now that I think about it... how could Sango and Shinpachi be twins, when Sano's got amder eyes and Shin emerald ones?
Just a though... :)
And you got the mummy idea from the picture I posted, didn't you? :)

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mrstaguchi100 November 1 2012, 04:54:13 UTC

AHAHAHAHAHA That was great! probably better than the prince of tennis ones i must say.... i want this animated so bad!

manaika November 1 2012, 11:26:53 UTC

Aww, thank you!
*hugs*
That's a great compliment to a writer, I'm really flattered. ^///^
(try sending otomate an email, maybe they'll hear you out ~_^)

tokio_fujita November 12 2012, 17:41:02 UTC

This is the sweetest fanfic I've ever read. *melts*
I was quietly screaming "somebody draw this! I wanna see!" in about every paragraph.

I'm a little surprised to see Shin & Sano as siblings. Their brotherly quarrel is wonderful as usual. XD
I never imagined Hijikata/Sano could be this funny (while being sooo hot at the same time). And wow Pheromone dispenser Shiranui. XDD
The two senior couples are impressive too. One is jolly old couple and the other is OMG the creepiest combination. Their interaction must be quite a scene.
Love the children too. Heisuke is so sweet I wanna hug and squeze him. Ah but Toshi-san is right: the cutest is Saigo. >///

manaika November 12 2012, 20:04:01 UTC

Whoa, thank you! ^___^
Actually, it crossed my mind a few times as I was writing this, that it would even come over better as a webcomic, instead of a fic, but I didn't have the time and the skill, unfortunately. Thank you for the wonderfull compliment, it makes me really giddy happy that you enjoyed it ( ... )