Love and Blood, part 1

[manaika]

Name: Love and Blood

Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou

Pairing: Gwendal/Conrad

Warnings: incest, yaoi, lemon (citrus in general),

Rating: T - M/NC-17 - R

Summary: The brothers were always very close, maybe even closer than brothers could be. Especially two of them. But what if the truth came out? Maybe it's time for Conrad and Gwendal to reveal their greatest

Comments

[manaika]

Your welcome! ^^
It was fun to write! And the next chapter will be on, today or tomorrow

[anonymous]

cute brotherly love it was the greatest thanks

[manaika]

Thanks! I love writing brotherly love...in the double meaning and not. ^^

[darence_evren]

I haven't finished this chapter so I will comment again later. What I have read is great! Poetic groping is such a good thing. I love this line that you wrote:

"They both parted them, slipping the tongues inside the others mouth, meeting in a dance, where the passion was the rhythm and seed the music."

[manaika]

Thanks for the review! It really encouraged me! Because I wasn't sure about that exact sentence...the "seed" seemed kinda out of place for me, but I really wanted something like that there, so I left it. ANd now you're telling me that you loved the sentence and it really makes me happy. ^^
Thanks again and I'm looking forward to the second part of your review!

[darence_evren]

Okay. I must say that I think your style of writing is my favorite I've ever read. It's so pretty! It flows and is poetic. And it's a good storyline. I'm surprised their aren't more comments! I am glad you left that one line in! ^__^ Now I must go onto the second and third parts of this wonderful story!

By the way: Your icon is spot on!!

[manaika]

Thanks...
*______*
I like it when I get compliments to my writing style!
And I love to get compliments on my icons! ^____~