Making Fire

[mamas_minion]

Was it a burning branch from a lightning strike?  The still hot embers of a forest fire?  How man came to harness fire is a mystery that may never be solved.  But with those first flames, came the sparks of ideas, from whence soon more advanced tools would follow.  The march of progress, slow at first, began rapidly moving forward from that point

Comments

[kickthehobbit]

This is creepy, but in a good way? I really love the idea behind it. :)

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, creepy in a good way is a great way to describe this piece.

[bleodswean]

AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! This is AMAZING!!!!

[mamas_minion]

Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it

[rayaso]

Great idea, and well written. I love the idea of an MMORPG making itself God is wicked fun!

[mamas_minion]

Thank you glad you liked it,I thought what would be the easiest way for a program to access a lot of networks and though duh a game and it would have to be an MMORPG.

[halfshellvenus]

This is one of my favorites from you. It's creepy and sardonic (Some genius (me)), and the voice and idea are terrific.

The abandoned gas station is a wonderful, harmless-looking disguise for something so utterly dangerous.

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I wanted the voice of the program to come of as a know it all.

[jem0000000]

Oh dear! I am with KTH, creepy but in a good way. :)

[mamas_minion]

Thank you for reading

[jem0000000]

You're welcome. :)